All Comments on 'Daddy in the Dark Pt. 02'

Another perfect part I have been waiting and checking for part 2 can't wait for part 3

Can't wait for part 3...

So realistic in daddy having guilt after cumming. In the beginning my mother always had guilt for about 12 hours.

I really hope he knocks her up, that would be wonderful.

I so agree! Fawn should definitely get breed by Daddy! Whether he knows or not, although his participation would be hotter. Nothing can touch the high a gulity cum brings... Maybe Daddy couldn't stay away and breed his precious kitten in her room? I am soo ready for the next chapter!!

1st part was so good, I bookmarked it and visited from time to time..

Also constantly checked your profile hoping maybe one day youd wrote part 2.

And one day, I didnt have high hopes but there it is!

ty so much for writing this, its great..And so much sweeter than part 1..

Please please write part 3, and dont scrap this story,

Its just too good! I love this <3

Ill make a literotica account after this

So I can keep up better :-D

Much love :-*

Please write a part 3!

We need part 3 soon!!1 great story!

Please do a part 3!!! i need to know what happens next!! This can't be the end please!!!

I would really love a chapter 3. Such a hot story, I love everything about it. Please say there is more to come. I'm sure I would not be the only one willing to get on her knees and beg😉.

wow....that was the hottest story I have ever read on here... Chapter 3 soon ???? 25 stars !!!!!!!!!

I think the period of being a good girl is about to end.

Please show me your next plan.

I hope he gets over it and just fucks her again. And not turn to a family thing please.

I loved how the doubt entered her mind as she went over and over, about the subtle hints, she thought her daddy was sending her. So true to life. Then the spanking, OMG!, so incredibly hot and intense. I fell into the story. I was feeling each swat as Fawn did then as the finger slid in. I had the same reaction as Fawn. That is some incredible writing. And I owe to two so far. ;)

One more thought. I hope there is a next part. But, because in came back early from a business trip. And that then mom left. Maybe the phone was actually from a private investigator. And she only said she was at her mother's taking care of her. This may clear his mind as to allow him to be unfaithful. Also maybe Josh comes over to try and reconcile with fawn. And when she refuses, he tries to get one for the road. Against Fawn's will. But her big, strong, loving, daddy saves her. Leading to more.

But you don't need my help. You do an outstanding job all by yourself. Thank you

Please make a part 3. Please? With sugar on top.

Part 3 please! This needs to keep going! So intense and greatly written.

First off you are a really good writer. I think the daughter is a bit of a brat which was a bit of turn off. Otherwise a good story. HOWEVER, you are like several other writers I have read on this site. You start but don't finish a series. Who leaves you hanging like this??? It really irritates me to no end. A writer writes not only for themselves but also for the enjoyment of the reader. At least I hope. Then you leave us hanging which isn't nice. It doesn't build trust in the reader that your a dependable author who we/I would want to "1-click" no matter what. Even if the story wasn't that great I would want to read more of your material. I cannot read anything else you write, no matter how good you are, because you might deceive me again and leave me hanging again. And if you left this story like this on purpose then I hate your endings and I won't read your others for this reason either. I will never know why you left it but I do know I won't be reading your stuff anymore. Too bad. You would have been worth the investment of my time.

BESTSELLER!!!!!!!

all I ever wanted was part 3

Write part 3 please, this is too good for a series to be done so early like this, please continue, thanks for all your hard work. Many people are waiting for part 3 !

We need part 3! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

★★★★★★ out of 5 ☆ .... We really need Chapter3, 4, 5, etc.... Please.

Great story! When will part 3, 4....... be posted?

I've been checking back here for over a year now for part 3. What is going on???

5 stars! The well described sex and vivid imagery made me wet!

But I was also disturbed by her level of manipulation. She refused to take "NO" for an answer. Most of what she thought her dad felt for her, was all in her head. The emotions and love he gave during sex, wasn't for her, it was for his wife, her mom. And he really, really, really loved his wife. There was no weakness in that marriage like other stories I've read. He was clearly horrified by what happened, but the only thing she thought about was how she felt, not him as her dad, and definitely not her mom.

In her mind, within a 24 hour period her mom became competition. Even though her dad made it clear that this is not what he wanted. If you ever meet a person like this, run away! Speaking from experience, this is the kind of "ex" that turns into a stalker. Be direct, don't string them along, don't feel sorry for them and don't give in. This is the kind of person the term "red flag" was made to describe. This personality trait, male or female, relationship or friendship will wreak havoc in your life. When you look into their eyes, you should see an image of your house burning down, because that's what it will feel like. If you're a very "giving" person in bed or in life, use this girl as a cautionary tale for your dating life and how to pick close friends. Otherwise you may find your pet rabbit boiling on the stove.