All Comments on 'Daddy in the Night'

Really well written. So hot. More.... please

Four Stars, only because you haven't gone further. Hoping for many more chapters. Many possibilities, where to proceed.

I LOVE YOU, MY LITTLE BABY.

Very nice. Looking forward to the next chapter

I haven't read anything for a few weeks. This is exactly what I wanted to find. Thank you.

Hot, but you need to. Proof read.

Loved it….more please

Dreadful, 2nd person writing style is so bad.

Really hot and deliciously descriptive…. Got my pussy all creamy but I was ready for a serious fuck session to commence: I hope there will be a part 2.

5 stars. Please continue.

WOW! A Very naughty story.

An over abundance of adverbs does not equate to good writing. Especially when you repeat the same ones over and over again.

Jarring changes and a lack of consistency.

I came. Definitely more please.

So hot! S was a big sumddy fan back when his tumblr was still up. I wish he would come back

5 stars. Would have liked a fuck session before ending. Hope a fuck story follows.

Dress that little slut in lingerie. Sheer bra, satin garterbelt, sheer stockings and frilly ankle sox with heels she wears the whole time Daddy pounds his daughter.

She should talk dirty telling Daddy how she loves fucking. And another facial would be perfect for this cum drinking fuck slut.

hmm dasdy add my snap mollyraine99 i just turned 18

What a good little girl for Daddy!