All Comments on 'Daddy, It Doesn't Fit!'

Great story, Thanks.

Fucking love stories similar to this. WOW!! SO FUCKING HOTTTTT

Ok this is so dirty but it was fucking hot gosh

holy shit this is the best story ever sequel please

haha i'll get the lube 😂😂

well first of all, to the last comment, i sure bled that much when my virginity was taken! i liked most of this story, until the end where suddenly it seemed to turned into rape. then it just disturbed me.

Good overall story, but 11" penis is too much.

I think his daughter may have noticed the father struggling to keep that hidden beneath his clothes.

Wouldn't one that long choke most people if pushed all the way down their throat and do damage to the vaginal area if fully inserted?

Perhaps a reduction to one comfortably larger than average would make it a more "believable" piece of fiction while retaining the essence of the story.

Authors can do what they want, even stretch reality.

This is the second time I've read it and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sequel, please.

Best. Comment. Ever.

Were you busy jacking off while you wrote this? I went back to my high school reunion and met Mister Jackson, the gruff, no-nonsense English professor who gave me my lifelong love of smoking jackets and broom closet molestation; we went over this final page with a red marker and there was more blood on the sheets than her cherry once we finished. I suggest you download Word 2003 and ask Clippy for help formatting next time.

Well it is a good story, but i dont know about other readers but there isnt such thing as "popping" a cherry, and women certainly dont bleed that much when their virginity gets taken.

i don't care what anyone says that was hot please make more my daddy hasn't fucked me in days

OK, She threatened her dad with fucking someone else if he didn't, then when the dad fucked her hard, she regretted it and gave him the cold shoulder and then just coz of a dare, she reconciled with him just to get 11 inches of meat in an even tighter hole. That's just fucked up.

the father's cock. Was it huge? Wasn't positive.

RAPE is RAPE I don't care who started it when she said STOP and he didn't its RAPE.

The lol applies to both the third act and the dipshits who expected the amateur incest smut story to follow the rules of consent.

ya that be every dads dream

I loved the story, I kept trying to guess if the girl was really this naive or if she had a plan, if daddy would endure or fall in love.

I loved the fact that he lost control during the BJ, but I didnt guess what he woulld do in the end. I know this is as realistic as "time travel hot tub" but the girls dialog is PURE GOLD!

Amazing job.

For all the assholes that are leaving negative and rude comments for the story- FUCK OFF!! This is obviously a fantasy and if you don't like the plot or characteristics of characters then don't read the story! Just stop reading and find another story! Don't criticize another's fantasy writing because you can't find realistic porn stories to jack off to! By the way, love your story! Wish there was a sequel!

This ranks right down there as one of the worst stories on Lit. 11 inches - give me a break. "Daddy" is an asshole.

A completely unbelievable rape story. A father rapes his daughter. Lousy story. one star

oh oh oh julie oh god jules im im im cumming julie oh YES YES YESSSSSS oh julie ohhhh god julie your so tight oh god jules i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, it's fiction, and we know that when we come to this page. I often suspect that even the "true" stories are made up and not factually true. But even fiction---even fantasy, at some level---has to have believability. And this story does not have it. An eleven-inch cock is so unbelievable that a high-school boy might brag about it, but never allow it to be actually measured. Medically, the average erect penis is a bit less than six inches; 8 in. is rare, but 11 in. qualifies you for the donkey exhibition at the zoo.

Their dialogue was hot and so funny! That little girl is a slut in the making. Such a naive, spoiled little brat in heat. I wonder how far she's willing to go. If her friends dared her to do a threesome, would she do that, too? Would she invite her uncle... Or the next door neighbor? Please tell me there's a sequel!

Guess she determined 11 inches up the butt will be the payoff. Great five star fuck story. Can't wait to read when he does his granddaughter and his and daughter's daughter.

A very well written story, although I was turned off by the part when it got rough. Adding a “rough" or “rape" tag would be helpfull, not everyone likes that.

This story is so hot.

If you didn't want him to fucking FUCK you then why tease him and ask him to do all these things with you and she's a slut after saying that he's a mean daddy the bitch doesn't talk to him until she needs to have sex with him again fucking slut

When it gets forceful, it doesn't turn me on at all. The beginning is not bad. But when she says Stop, he should stop. It would be far more interesting and erotic to see her change her mind...

It takes a number of things that make a story good, the most important of which,that the characters stay true to who the readers were told they were.This is what makes the story "real". And the "real" is what makes the reader care. For me, I think the worst comment a writer could hear about his story is, "I didn't care".

In this story, the father character, was presented as having such a "caring" love for his daughter.

In a 'good' story, that same guy could have never hurt the daughter character the way described by this writer....just sayin.

This is a well written and hot story. May I also say, FICTIONAL. People are going off about it being too rough, that's the point of stories. They are stories that let people imagine what they want. It doesn't necessarily mean that they would consider it in the real world. Yes "no means no", but but this story could also be categorized into non-consent/reluctance and people are having trouble about it being her dad? The people who selected the INCEST/TABOO category? It's a story. Get over it.

What if she was just faking about the dares and just really wanted to fuck her daddy.

This story is super hot. It's just fiction people. When he gets forceful it turned me on even more. You have made a very happy lady cum three times tonight!

The story was great up until you became forceful...this is supposed to be your daughter, whom you state that you love...I don't see how anyone would ever want to try any sexual ever again if they can't trust you, the parent, to be gentle and to teach them with love and understanding...not the old "a stiff dick has no conscience" routine. With the way you treated her thus far I don't buy the "she's took a dare for anal after what the total lack of regard with her mouth, and then her virginity...just don't buy it at all. If you are that inconsiderate and forceful in real life then you should seek professional help.

The story was freaking hot as far as the anon that says you crossed the line they need to stop and remember its fictional story and the anon that was going on about the chars in these stories needing to be in prison and people liking these thing being mentally I'll they had to actively enter the section named incest taboo to find these stories

Ah sayed you write well, you do but you cross the line on more than one occasion. No means no. Sometimes you need rules.

Come on, what is she mentally impaired? She doesn't know what incest is? And she is a senior in high school and doesn't know what a blow job entails? Bullshit. She didn't think it would bother her dad? Bullshit.

That a big fat 11 inch cock will fuck me senseless one day!! If anyone wants to fuck a bitch from Africa my legs are open lol i get wet just thinking about a big man with a big cock <3 <3

Needs more chapters I wanna see what happens when they do anal sex and if I were heather I wouldn't be want to be with her friends because if there daring each other to do this that means there sluts

I want that fucking ass hole in prison PERIOD. I cannot do daddy daughter shit. and any whore mom who promotes it. she needs to be in prison too and does happen! You gotta be really mentally ill to like this shit.

Please, pretty please let someone with an 11 inch cock fuck me. I have not had sex with a partner since 1989. I am really horny. Fuck me fuck me in whichever hole you wish.

Usually when a story has a character with an 11 inch cock I stop reading, but in this case it was an integral part of the story line.

I loved the dialogue and build up that lead dad to letting her suck his cock. The desire and conflict was palatable.

I didn't care for the "rapiness" of the second act, but she did ask for it, and I can't imagine how great that tight virgin pussy felt, so who could blame him!

Where were these girls when I was in high school??!!

I was laughing the whole time. This story is a dark comedy that I could see in my minds eye. You painted your story out so well. I loved it so very much. As far a I am concearned you brought together the movies Clueless with Alicia Silverstone as Pixie..

Of the thousands of stories I've read on this site, I can honestly say THIS is the best one. I was laughing out loud at the daughter begging for her "favors" and was cheering the dad on as he took her virginity. When he kept sticking her I was out loud cheering him "Stick her again Daddy!" OMG I have to read it again. Good Job!

The hymen is NOT inside the vagina. The hymen is over the opening of the vagina.

The hymen is NOT a seal, the hymen is residual skin from the opening being formed via skin "melting away" in the foetus.

The hymen (skin) may be thick, or paper thin. The more fragile the easier to rip by just normal movements such as exercise. Compare to the webbing between fingers: those with thin extra skin can rip it easily.

The hymen (skin) may cover most of the opening, or be almost non-existent thanks to foetal development. The skin may have one hole or many, the edge may be naturally jagged without any rips or tears. As the period blood has to come out, the few babies or young girls whose hymen has not formed holes will get their hymen (their skin covering the vagina) cut into by a doctor so their bodies can drain normally, and not have their unnaturally closed off vaginas become an increasingly filled container of dead blood that can't escape their bodies.

Hymen is not magic or some freshness seal. It's just skin. After ripping (which does not always happen during first vaginal intercourse as skin can stretch, which you can see on any obese person's limbs/torso or any pregnant lady's belly) it does not disappear. It's just not gonna be suspended over the hole the same way as before, since you ripped into it. The skin will still remain around the opening, just bunched up.

The hymen is NOT some sort of seal inside the vagina before the cervix. The cervix normally has, and needs, for a clear path to outside the body, so that the uterus can dump its monthly shedding internal lining to the outside. There are rare abnormalities such as dual uteruses/vaginas that will result in there being two vaginal canals inside, the wall between them being comparable to the wall between a normal vagina and colon, that can get ripped during not careful penetration. But that is a vertical wall, not a horizontal wall/seal.

Seriously, what the fuck? This fic was hilarious and sexy, and then bam, major sex anatomy fail. Might as well have mentioned cumming so much into her vagina that she threw the overflow up (the vagina and the food reproduction system are not connected, nor could you put a hose of infinite semen up her ass slowly filling her up inside and expect the overflow to come out her mouth, her intestines would pop like overfilled water balloons long before that). Still rating it 5/5, but FFS don't do this sort of thing again. Unless you explicitly set up a fantasy world where hymens are some magical barriers inside, this stuff is just painfully ignorant of basic human form, on the same level as claiming humans have bones inside their penises, or (like that weird song) that gorillas have huge dicks (gorillas have tiiny dicks, humans have the biggest dicks out of all the apes).

The story setting is indeed quite unrealistic and better for it, but there is an important difference between lack of realism in behavior, and suddenly out of the blue mentioning something that's the equivalent of "and then they pressed their cloacas together".

this is the hottest story I have ever read in my entire life. Thank you for writting it.

I have never been so fucking turned on by a story in my life. I don't care if you (author) are male/female/whatever I just want you inside me NOW. Holy fuck I need you now. You may be sick but #damn

u slaying

CHAPTER 4 WAS HOT TO THE 99 !!! I can't wait for chapter 5. I jerked off 3 times. I still want to but can't right now. lol Definitely tomorrow. lol Thanks for sharing this great chapter.

The father DID rape her she told him before the fact not to go all the way but it's her fault to for not learning from prior experience with the 1st video and what the hell made her think any man in his right mind would not try to fuck her after allowing him to stick it in? I am a woman and I can't help but sympathize, rape is horrible but despite multiple warnings she asked for it. Does anyone else think she comes off as a bit of an airhead?

-ICan'tEven

even in fiction. He really is a sick fuck, and whether his daughter was conditioned by him or somehow got it from her slut mother, she's sick too. Consensual incest, or incest driven by the girl is one thing, this is something else. And the comment from 10/14 is the kind of thing I would expect from a rapist justifying himself.

Its pretty blatantly clear that she wanted everything she got by the way she acted and the way she talked with him while it was happening, she just maintained the tease and the plausable denyability, 'I want him to do it but I want to be able to say I didn't want to do it.' How do you do that? Daddy put your big ole hard cock that hadnt touched a pussy in years up inside my tight lil' ole wet, shaved tiny beaver, just don't DO anything after its in there. Not that she had ANY doubts after he fucked her throat.

The point is, the author WROTE this FICTION that way.

Hope the author writes some more good stuff!

I loved this ... surprised when he started being more dominate instead of just letting the girl get what she wants. Not so surprised the second time it took a turn. But i must say i enjoyed it all !

More Dominate daddy please !

It doesn't matter, they were both as wrong headed as they could possibly be. She had no business even doing the dare. She had no business showing the videos to anyone much less her father. She had no business asking him the first dare. He is an idiot and has no business trying to be the father of a teenage girl. Should have sent her to boarding school if he knew he was a weakling. He was so wrong to give in the first time and she should have learned he had no self control once started. She had to know what the result would be with the second dare and he should know it will never stop. Neither of them feeling totally at peace with what they've done. But so easily avoided, all that is needed is one of them to say, 'I'm not doing this'. Everybody is wrong here, and neither is doing anything right. Both rape, and mind games are going on here.

Pretty obvious you sick fucks will say anything to make an excuse to cover what you know is wrong.

I wish I had a cock like that to fuck my tight puss. I loved the story but I think she made her bed and she had to lie in it. To much no daddy. but good story will continue ready your works thank for cumming..

All of these "rape" comments surprise me. I think it's pretty obvious that Heather is playing games with her father, in a couple of ways: saying "don't do X" as a way to telegraph "do X", and "losing her virginity" to her father - didn't she lose it in part 1?

Great story, though!

Wow, very sexy story and I hope you follow up with the anal

Sooooooo sexy I love how huge they made his dick and how he ACCIDENTLY popped her cherry

I love daddy-daughter stories I get so wet just reading about having daddy's cock slowly enter his daughter and having her moan with desire. Ten having daddy getting ready to shoot his cum into his daughter's pussy that was waiting for his hot cum.

So glad he fucked her. She needed to be filled with daddy's cock. My pussy is soaked and ever so empty at the moment. I miss my daddy's cock.

Why did you stop and not do the anal part? Too bad, it would have been exciting.

Very fuckable story! The rape added to the illusion. I mean this wouldn't happen in real life! It was rape though! I liked the story! Thank you for sharing it! ;)

I like that Daddy took what he wanted! Yummy!

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He has an 11 inch cock? What is he? A horse?

But I have to admit, it did make me wet. Didn't like the past where it turned into rape though.

was this a real story or all made up? if all made up I loved it, but if it was not made up then I didn't like the end!

He has an 11 inch cock? What is he? A horse?

But I have to admit, it did mae me wet. Didn't like the past where it turned into rape though.

You wrote..."the cameraman's blue jeans, unzipping them, pulling out a young, rock-hard cock. It was nothing impressive, five and a half inches"

What man talks like this about another man much less quoting his size like he measured it with a ruler? You should have just left it with "he was an average sized guy" or some shit like that.

i would love to read what happens next between heather and her daddy

I liked it lol it was different

Yeah, he lost control. i can honestly say, i'd be on his side. (i am ready for your rage) Ladies, do not tempt the male sex drive. it is a violently explosive thing.

the story itself however was great in my opinion. couple of darker points but it ended with a joke.

I liked the beginning. But the dad was just being mean! She was a virgin and she cried. But he treated her like a sex toy! His own daughter! Itd be funny if she snipped the 11inches off in the morning.

Yeah, it's just a story, but still. Next story should be he goes to sleep and she puts a bullet in his head. Or he goes to sleep and she cuts eight inches off in the morning before shooting him. Or maybe she wakes him up and shoots herself in his bedroom.

But from the looks of it, a lot of people really got off on this. Might be time for some of them to reflect on what that means.

The dad has gotta be Ryan Reynolds. ... Just sayin'.

Liking the realism between the characters and how your descriptive detailing goes beyond their emotions and details, you gave them personallity and characteristics. That was a 4 stars for sure but the fact you gave it life is why i will rate it 5.

I quite enjoyed reading this story. Dad had every right to keep going, until he came. That was the least the daughter could so for him, because she did start it after all. She should have let him finished based on that fact that he was her dad alone. I am one of those that feel like dad should be the one to pop the cherry and teach her all about sex. Nobody loves her more than daddy.

This is DEFINITELY rape. It's really horrifying that so many people don't actually know what rape is. It's also horrifying that people that write sex stories don't know anything about female anatomy. The hymen isn't a wall across the entire inside of the vagina and its definitely not 3 inches inside the vaginal canal. If it was than women wouldn't be able to menstruate until their hymen was broken. Have some common sense. Also an 11 inch cock? That's so unrealistic and so big it would be bordering on comical considering the average penis is 6 inches and a vagina is usually around 5 inches deep.

More eleven inch cock b.s. That was good for a lost star, Then came the rape. Should have killed it entirely, but the writing was basically very good. It also was a very true depiction of how hard it is for a guy to stop once he starts, and his partner wants him to quit. If he really loves her, though, he will honor her wishes. This guy didn't really love his daughter very much. - and now I guess he'll tear up her asshole, but I won't read it. Two stars for the good depiction and one for good writing.

Lol, now THIS story, is my favorite! I love it. I thought some parts of it were funny. The daughter-- she was totally asking for it. She could have whined all she wanted before her dad started doing anything, but the fact that she went back to him just proved she was into it. This is probably the story that I go back to reread the most.

Sometimes I get annoyed with the half-assed stories some people post. Some of them are just meant to set you off quickly, and they have no build. I feel like this one can do that, but you have more of it. I still wish it was longer, like some of the other stories you have.... but four pages is good enough. If you ever plan to add a second part to any of the single stories you have in your page, I really want it to be this one. I love love love this one. It's hot, it's funny (not sure if I'm just psychotic or if some parts really are humorous-- could be both), your pacing is good, great grammar, and it's written by you-- so I always know it will be good.

I'm going to apologize again for my fellow readers who either don't know how to read tags or have to much time in their day, they felt the URGE to leave stupid, useless comments. The were probably too busy rubbing one off to your story, they came really hard, and felt ashamed for having naughty fantasies.

I'm sorry for all the hard time any of these knuckleheads give you. I love yours stories, and from some of the nicer comments, I can see I'm not the only one. Some of the people who like it also don't take the time to comment (like I used to do) or were too embarrassed because they fear their sexuality. (Come on guys, FANTASIES ARE NORMAL. We all have them.) Keep writing, and don't go soft on us (no pun intended) to please anyone. I'm really happy with all the stories you've written thus far, and I am desperately waiting for the next one. Adieu!

Would love for you to include anal in your stories and not just the allusion to it.

Okay we've been patient enough, time for daughter shares daddy with girlfriends!

The story that keeps on giving, so I can keep on cumming! Merry Christmas, Vanilla! :) xoxo, Courtney

Make more please

Crap a load of what

So hot

Well written, good character development, not over the top descriptives, sensual interaction, some glorious non-con, it's why I'm here. Fuck. My second read. Thank you.sly

I liked it up until the rape... Rape is vile..

Fuck me, indeed! You know I love it! Xoxo, Court

If u are really asking that question you're too young to be on this site or for any of us to answer kid. But I dare you to ask your parents that question.

honestly, its whenever the male lead disregards all sign of respect for the girl and just haves her that turns me on. ive read all of your stories already, some even more than twice. keep up the good work!

I just LOVE all your stories, they make me cum so hard. I think the force/nonconsent parts are particularly hot!! Keep them coming!!!

Scream out in orgasmic bliss as I cum so hard my ears ring... So fucking hot! :-) literally going to fuck myself into oblivian!

Your #1 Fan

Well-written, a very dirty premise, and hot sex, all with a humorous background and a surprisingly light-hearted mood. What more could you want?

A+++, would read again.

You should do a follow up chapter were they do get pregnant. And I want to see how the anal went.

Up until the last bit of dialogue, I kind of agreed with you... But the last bit of talking just really says what kind of person his daughter is.

Great story. The forcing in the middle was intense and traumatic, and well written. And the last dare tells the reader that while he most certainly is a bad man, she's a bad girl too.

Thanks, you fucking ruined it with the rape; I thought he loved his daughter, it didn't stopping him raping her did it? Take it away, no stars...

Fantastic story! Pls keep writing!!

Fabulous story as usual, VanillaExtract. This story is so fucking hot I can't believe it was your first attempt. Keep up the good work!

Love it, love it, a million times, I love it! I think this is the perfect story. Xoxo, Courtney

This story was amazing, a blend of hot and humorous, something that i find lacking because of all the stories now with sad or strange and confusing endings lately, this one left me laughing at the end... not crying.

VanillaExtract, Finally, a story from a man's perspective. You are brilliant and I can't say that enough. I loved that you lost control and forced youself down her throat and later into that tight pussy. I fantasize about scenarios like that all the time, they are my favorite. Daddy/daughter role playing gets me wetter faster than anything. Thanks for writing your story. PLEASE WRITE MORE. I will be reading when you do.

Ten stars if it were possible!!!