All Comments on 'Daddy, It Doesn't Fit!'

Ich hoffe es gibt noch einen weiteren Teil.Ist verdammt gut geschrieben.

Your approach to a very delicate situation was thoughtful, realistic with a touch of humor. Very well done!

I only wish my Dad was the one that took my cherry. Just like in your hot fucking storyline.

And you sure this was your first time ?? 😜😜

This was very hot. Things happened at a steady pace not loosing excitement and progressing just fast enough to be a great masturbation tale. 5 stars.

Bill S.

Aside from the titillating narrative this is a really funny story......like genuinely hilarious 😂 well done

First of your stories, loved it, sooo fucking hot.

Hahaha she getting anal and another pudsy and a cock cleaning

I think you need to add the anal one then it would be five stars lol

Be careful what you ask for. I have to take the father's side in that he did try to warn her what might happen, knowing his years of lack of sexual contact. Also if she was so worried about her virginity and all why was she so excited about becoming a 'celebrity' at school and 'everybody' seeing her video. Peer pressure sure is a demon sometimes as is a man thinking with his 'little head'!

I always finish a story even when it’s terrible. The 11 inches is completely ridiculous and there’s no way she would forgive him for raping her or let him do anal afterwards. The hymen part is also stupid like someone else said.

Very HOT story...good writing. It kept me leaking throughout the story. Keep the stories cumming!

Ohhh come on, you complain about 11 inches (and some of do have 11 inches it is not a picnic) but be honest 8 or 9 inches would have been to big for her virgin pusssy. And do not play the rape BS card...... if she did not want to get fucked she should know have taken the dare. Thuth is she love the attention of being an easy target for recognition of showing herself as a sex object. She knew she was going to show a video of a cock in her pussy. She is going to show her pussy with a cock in it to the whole school. Videos never go away, just wait to be re-discovered. What do want to bet that her future husband and probably later in life someone in her place of employment will see them. So Do Not try the BS of playing the rape card. I have no problem with Daddy fucking her. I really have a problem with her taking 2 then 3 inches having an orgam and some form of passion not taking her over..Keep in mind the plan was for Daddy but she would have let her neighbor fuck her. Good story with some exceptions to the logic.

come on 11 inches, never seen one that size in porn, just too crazy, the story line was ok though

Started out decent, then it turns to a messed up rape fantasy from a sexist father. Not worth the read

Great tale I'm waiting for part 2

Crazy awful rape, but it is hot. Most men would do it. Any port in a storm. Very beautifully written.

Loved it, great story line and development.

started doing the LMAO thing at the 11" cock and never fully recovered.

Perfect. She needed to be fucked like that. She wanted it and daddy took it. I cum every time I read this!!!

I want to give you fair credit for the quality of the writing. The quick, snappy dialogue, the perfect pauses between, the initial characterizations of the MCs, the easy setup of such an insane premise. Honestly, I spent the first half of your story doubled over with laughter and couldn't wait to finish it. You have a real gift for humour and I hope you'll be exploring this side of you more with future stories.

Where you unfortunately lost me was in the second half as some others have mentioned. I know, I know. It's NON CON. When I first started reading it, it was the humour that really grabbed my attention. I felt instead that I was reading a hilarious screwball comedy where the clueless but earnest teenager makes an outrageous demand of the harried and mortified parent. I was hooked.

Then the pendulum swung and the previously caring Daddy Jeckyll turned into the sociopath rapist Mr. Hyde. Again, I know it's NC. But the change in tone and direction was so sudden and jarring I got whiplash. It wasn't just disturbing to read, it didn't follow any logical progression in the story. Fantasy or not, it didn't make sense. Dad starts off being a concerned, loving and openly emotional father only to switch personality and disassociate himself entirely from the awful abuse he was perpetrating on his own daughter whom he loved, even to the point of blaming her for it.

I think your writing skills are certainly good enough that you could write either a deeply compelling NC or an entertaining comedy/farce with equal aplomb. Just not in the same story.

Lastly, a sincere thank you to a previous ANONYMOUS reviewer for sharing the ACCURATE location and description of the hymen. Writers and people in general: PLEASE TAKE NOTE. Our bodies are indeed fascinating. Please take some time to learn just how much. :)

Loved the story. The non consensual part made it hotter. Loved how he kept ramming into her and came inside her. Waiting for a sequel.

Hot and everything but the stuff about the hymen was 💀💀 Please google female anatomy to avoid spreading/propagating misinformation about virginity and hymens etc. It isn't some barrier you can feel a few inches in, it's a thin stretchy membrane right at the entrance and it doesn't obscure it unless there is a medical issue (perforated hymen) - it stretches the first time you have sex and can tear slightly if it's put under lots of stress, which is worsened if the woman isn't wet enough or if the dick is very girthy. Bleeding isn't super common. The idea that it's this barrier the dad felt with his dick a few inches in is ridiculous.

Hated the way the father turned out to be....first he was loving and caring and he easily turned into a rapist and a child abuser. was a good story until the real dad showed his ugly head.

Hey Anon a day ago. Anal is fir her not him you fucking dumbass. Each video was of her. Why the fuck would it now be of her recording him taking it? The confused one is you. Lmao. Can read, but not too bright in the head are you? Loser

anal ruins the entire 3-part series, unfortunately, even though it's just a couple lines in this one, it proves he's some closeted, confused dude, not a straight man.

Love that little girl she just horny glad she got stretched good the first time

I always wanted to fuck my daddy he too had a huge bulge he wanted it too but neither of us had the nerve to approach the other

Guy. NON. CON. it means not consensual. Basically rape. Don’t read a story that is non con and then complain that you didn’t want to read that.

...for the sake of discussing reality just for a moment, any father who finds themselves in initial scenario has badly failed as an adult and a parent.

It's the parent's job to set a framework of rules that their child learns to operate under so as to avoid pitfalls and how to operate without falling afoul of social and moral condemnation by their peers.

"Normal" is another word for "stable" behavior. Unstable behavior gets people hurt and - at extremes - killed. Well, more people. It's not a zero sum game - it's a constantly fluctuating number.

In short - if your child or the youth you are responsible for raising feel it's appropriate to ask you this question, seek help.

You should have it continue into anal and we’re the dad notices the daughter has a slight baby bump but she says it’s not and they go to the doctor and find out that she pregnant and she starts crying but he says he love her and they move away get married and raise there sons or daughters and then they keep making videos

I LOVE how he went from reluctant participation to getting exactly what he wanted. Mmmmmm

Best story I’ve read on literotica! Loved the dialogue. Loved their dynamic. Perfect!!

Why would y’all read a story that is specifically in the non con category and then call the author sick for making it a non con story 💀 like first of all it’s fiction, second of all if you’re not into that then maybe don’t go around reading stuff that’s in the non con category

I agree with anon about this story being related to rape in real life. That being said, 5/5

Nato_

pretty funny story actually

A pussy doesn't need to be trained but her ass will need to! Hope she loves her dad's and his big cock and begs him to breed her.

Prime example how men set themselves up to be accused of rape. Before his full on assault, she begged him for these sexual acts no matter how many times he said no and then complained when he gave in and did exactly as she asked (not talking about the assault). On the first complaint put it back in your pants, say it's o.k. you're not ready and leave the room, don't fuss. No matter how much they begged for it, if they begin to complain, that means for whatever reason the person is no longer sure of what they want or has changed their mind. Leave the room or risk ending up in court.

But the story itself was well written and a good story.

Next part? Please

This may be the 30th time I'm reading this story in 5 years. It's still great ❤

Dad needs to go to prison followed directly by going to hell. What a piece of shit. I admit the story was well written and creative. My wife was raped by her uncle decades ago, when I met him I put him in the hospital and the family knew I tried putting him in the morgue.

So fucking good!

She couldnt help it, she was triple dog dared.

You can't back down from a triple dog dare.

Absolutely amazing

Incest is soooo wrong. I feel guilty about almost splooging in my pants reading this one. I would have loved the guilty pleasure of daddy dropping a load up his daughters ass.

I hate how dumb the girl and their dares here...

I absolutely hate people who read stories in n/c then complain that there is rape. You chose to read a story in noncon category.

Started out sexy. But rape is rape, and I didn’t want to read a story about rape. Should have been less forcing.

Too much pain for the daughter

just a bit of a turn on, after all it is just fiction and she did ask........................

So good and hot! Came hard. Thank you for posting

Started out great but I absolutely hated the rape play (or was it actual rape?) at the end.

I loved it. It was unique and exciting. Good job. I appreciate you. Keep writing.

The first tow times I bought she was dared, when she came home for anal, I think she was doing the daring!

You're a sick bastard................

Forget the father part.....deliberately hurting a woman like that is inexcusable....

i came so hard so many times

That was hot and now shes gagging for some anal

Are we sure the Daughter hadn't set the entire Dare thing up from the beginning as a way to get Daddy to give her his big cock she had spied on in his shorts and around the house as almost Every family member has at one time gotten a glimpse of the other people in the house

Wow!

She wouldn't want another encounter.

first of all, when you came onto this, you didn't have to finish reading. if u dont like it, don't read it. there's no need to be losers and post hate. some people like this stuff some don't. if u dont like it, then fucking leave

I;\my tired of seeing pathetic rants against these authors. You people knowingly come to this site, and willingly read the material. First, let me suggest you start reading Dr Suess. Second, if you want to ridicule someone for their efforts, have the fucking balls to post it under your name. Third, go slap both of your parents for dad not pulling out.

Let me start by saying; hey grandpa, get a fucking clue. The fucking girl begged her father for help. The father begged her to stop, and warned her of the potential, and obviously described outcome. The girl even manipulated the father, threatening and even attempting to use the neighbors cock instead. Then the girl comes back for anal. So shut the fuck up asshole. You obviously read the whole story. Sounds more like the raving of a guilty conscience. Pretty sure you enjoyed it as much as everyone else. What a fucking hypocrite. It isn’t rape when it’s requested moron. Great story Vanilla.

Rape? Really? I hate this story and the author, too 🤬

This story is too funny to get off on😂I couldn't stop laughing😂😂😂

Thought this site had a rule about INCEST RAPE!!! So much for rules.

I fucking loved this!!! The dialogue!! I wish I could read this for the first time more than once!!

At least my dad didn't force himself on me when he started being sexual with me in my teens. I considered his 8-inch thick penis pretty huge. He taught me how to make him aroused by certain play techniques on his penis. I know how bad he wanted to fuck me, but he refrained when I told him his dick was just too huge for my young pussy.

I can’t stop laughing. I know it was suppose to be sexual. But this was like a comedy instead. I love it. I’m still laughing....😂😂 Daddy just gave up and said “let me get the lube”. 🤷🏽 I guess these kids never learn😂😂 This is hilarious 🤣

i love the rape part well maybe it was disturbing to the others but i love reading stories like this

I love this story and would love to have my daddy do this to me, kik mhe1110

please say this is fake

Well this was really fucked up.. i would've understood if it was a rape fantasy and not actual rape

Wow very much hot sexy story.please bring her friends to worship her dad's big cock.I came whil reading it with my wife.

Started off so well. Went so downhill after the neighbour incident. Too unrealistic! Could well have been a brilliant story if it had concentrated on the loving relationship between them.

its disturbing and retarded.. as for ero its hot sure, but the daughter is just a cheap slut and clearly imbecile when it comes to reality but acts like everything is opposite. dad's nothing better. 3/5 just for good ero.

11" cock bullshit when 8" would have been too big for a virgin pussy, also not stopping when she asks and he was hurting her turned into rape

well written and a different way to get Daddys cock. Hope you write the next section of Daddy fucking her ass. Maybe have them work her up to that big dick.

...and so hot, and pretty good English (always a bonus in this site). Sincere thanks.

Haven't cummed that hard in ages. I love reading this kinda thing and imaging my daddy Dom doing it to me. Please write more stuff!!!

I couldn't read it because the names were so 70's/80's.

I know it's a silly reason to stop reading but typical names and typical fake as fuck sex stories and dialogue just doesn't do it for me

No daughter in her right mind would fuck her father or show him poem, or even a "dare" challenge. Just like sane kids don't eat tide pods.

And, as a father, he would be disgusted with himself if he got a hard on and he'd go get therapy if he really cared about her or himself.

Scenarios like this are more plausible in 17th and 18th thousands ( I don't call them "centuries" because that doesn't make sense to me. Calling the 1900 the 20th century confuses my brain. Like, shouldn't the 2000's be the 20th century? I don't fucking know. Right or wrong, it's just stupid and confusing. But anyways, back to the story.)

If this was dated back to when having incest was legal and normal, that'd be one thing.

If this was a syfy fantasy and their alien customs allowed incest, or d&d fantasy or some shit - that'd be one thing.

But they're humans, in a modern day age - fucking eachother.

No sane girl would be like this and no sane father would.

Maybe if the father had a split personality or voices in his head telling him to act this way, while he - the main vessel, tries to fight himself off but the evil side wins.

I dunno man, but the relationship between father and daughter is sacred.

Probably moreso than a mother and daughter because the father becomes the defender and protector while the mother becomes the attacker.

(Until the patriarchy said otherwise.)

There wasn't enough build up for me.

It felt rushed and forced out there.

But that's just my two cents.

You'll find dey wey, whatever your direction is.

For a first time, it was alright on the grammar and sentence structure.

i legitly chuckled at the end. nice story, have 5 stars

Oh my fucking god uuuuggghhhh fuck me fuck that story was amazing fuck me all of you

Nice background and theme, was very hot until the part of the non-consensual sex, that was a literally a rape scene. That part could had been easily written as a more erotic and enjoyable for both dad & daughter. Too bad it was such a miss. All in all, hope to read more from you

First, what a shitty father. What kind of dad won't even answer honest questions about sex to his kid? She asks him and he basically tells her to go and find out for herself, instead of just telling her, because he's uncomfortable? That and spoiling your kid like that is dumb. Then how exactly was she planning on making a "fake" video where it doesn't actually show him penetrating her, but also doesn't show his face or anything? What would you end up with then? A shot of two torsos rubbing on each other? Last, I don't really care if you want to write a rape story, but I'd prefer it if he wasn't totally ignoring her pain and even playing with her while she begs him to stop. It'd be much better if she asked him to stop but then started enjoying it. Her begging him to stop while he destroys all her trust by repeatedly saying he would stop only to start hurting her again isn't the action of someone who can't help themselves, it's the action of a sadist (and it doesn't really match his character the rest of the time). For all the people who say it's "her fault", you're just sick. She trusted him to do what they agreed on, to pretend to have sex. All this teaches her is that you cannot trust any man, not even your own "loving' father. No matter what he says, if he gets near your vagina he will 'loose control" and rape you even as you cry and beg him to stop. Only a sicko would do that. I get it, some people are turned on my rape and pain, but it doesn't seem like it fits his character as described. A normal person has more self control than that, no matter how horny they get. She offered to please him some other way, and even if he refused to stop, the whole "pulling it back out then violently ramming it home" part is just sadistic and cruel. He could have got off without hurting her so much. In fact, I think to a normal person that would be a real turnoff (although to a real normal person, the fact that he's her father would have been a turnoff way before that). And then to blame her afterwards...he doesn't even feel guilty for "loosing control", he blames her for "making him do it"? He doesn't love her if he feels that way. Assuming any kind of reality here, she's supposed to be a naive 18yo girl, how is she supposed to "know better"?

To all of you that can't stand this story...FUCK OFF. You know you read the entire thing, and probably busted a nut over it. It's fucking fiction. Get over yourselves. Oh, he had 11 inches, that's bullshit!!!. Fuck you. Oh, it was non consent. You still fapped to it. So STFU!!

Great fucking story. On to the next!!!!!!

FUCK THIS STORY IS AWESOME! I'm playing with my tits just reading it. I need to get fucked like this.

I don't read rape stories...

yeah it was incest, but also non-consent

i love stuff like this. it makes me so fucking wet.

Girls persistent

I started to read this story until I got to your stupid line about 11 inches. I get so fucking tired of this kind of bullshit I'm tempted to give you one star for it. I won't, because it probably makes some needle dicks happy to imagine that they're hung like this, but guys who are normal don't need to read about it.

I wish he was my Daddy.. and I could be 12 yrs old again.

Would love to read a chapter 4

Humor and kink. Great stuff.

You know you're wrong. Daddy knew he was wrong. Daughter knew she was wrong. And I know I'm wrong for laughing so hard XD.

For the most part I really enjoyed this story. In order to explain this I will tell you a little about me. I am a polyamoirus female and very into kink/taboo topics. My sexuality is awesome and I love it. It also kind of works in sections. With one of my partners we're into heavy kink: rape play, lots of humiliation all the goodies. With another of my partners I am in a DD/lg relationship full of all the nurturing perfectness there is there. Both partners are into incest play (yay for me) yet, they not handle it very differently. As I said one partner is my daddy very rough takes the darker side the other is my daddy whom I would do anything for who would never ever hurt me even if I begged because daddy knows best.

I guess my confusion stems from the fact that the daddy in your story is much like my two daddies we're fused and it was supper jarring. I don't have any big issues with the story. It was super well written and was really sexy. It so happens that I found this story when I was in my little space (age regressed) and was supper enjoying it. When the rape started, which while hot when I'm a big girl (not regressing). When I'm little subjects like the rape in this story can be problematic, almost traumatizing. You might think that weird as I already said I actively participate in rape play. I won't go into the why as that's too long a story but basically that my sexuality is almost like it's own split personality. The two don't share content.

I guess what I'm trying to say is that one side of me loves this story. When I found this story I wasn't in the mindset for it. The fist part of your story the daddy is so nice even when he gets a little overzealous with the throat fucking. The second half is a rape: a very nice rape but a rape. Which made me have to stop right in the middle of the story and call for daddy because it scared me.

I want to repeat there was NOTHING wrong with your story it was fantastic. Though your anatomy and how things work could use a little more research. I really enjoyed it and give it a 4.5/5.

I'd suggest that maybe in the future putting a trigger warning in the beginning, or something that gives warning to rape content as it can be an extreamly hard topic for some.

The ending was hilarious

I love your stories, can't stop reading them

Well done until he sadistically rapes her.

This story is totally insane, literally tried to stop myself from reading on! Made me wetter than I have ever been. Blown away.

Makes me wish i had a daughter that needed a favor

Great story, Thanks.