All Comments on 'Daddy, It Doesn't Fit!'

...to read anything else on here anymore. You're the best! Xoxo, Courtney

Thank you! :)

What do I need to do to get you to write another one?

Xoxo, Courtney

you get exquisitely horned.

Jesus Christ! I wanna fuck you just for writing this! Thanks again! Xoxo, Courtney

This has become my go-to story when I want to get off - which has been a dozen times already this week! So fucking hot! I wish I had a Daddy of my very own. :( Xoxo, Courtney

Engaging, well written, fantastic. Deserves a sequel.

great story i guess her friends are his next dare

That was the sexiest, funniest, story ever! I never read stories that are mire than two pages but that was some good shit! I am so wet right now and I'm going to go jump my dad's bones as soon as my mom and brother leaves. Please write a sequel!

That was awesome, the best daddy/daughter story I have read on here xx

This was absolute genius. Erotic and very well written. Ignore the negativity. In fact, I thought page 2 was going to get ugly, but it was kind of funny. I rarely comment on stories because I so often see negative comments from readers that forget this is fiction and the element of surprise is ruined if you outline everything that is going to be in it before it is read. The daughter asked for it, kept coming back for more despite her father's warnings, yet some still do not get it. Well done. I look forward to more.

really hot.. keep up the good work..

Thanks so much. I'm not sure how many times I've gotten off to this last chapter.

Well lets just say I want expecting this for a first story... But wholy fuck! This was hot! I loved it all but my favorite was the ending "I`ll get the lube" loved it:)

Excellent story! I LOVE Daddy force stories and the fact that he had a huge cock made it al the more better. Keep writing! Xoxo, Courtney

Your story became an instant joke when it became clear to me that you, like far too many, don't have a clue where the hymen is located. It's not a secret--it has been in the same place all along... look it up and see just how wrong you are.

I give this story two very well deserved orgasms ;)

now you need her girlfriends to join in with her and her dad the next time out you know that dad has been thinking of her girlfriends now maybe she can get them to jon in with them

I loved it, though I should feel guilty for enjoying such a strong rape story. I feel bad for the poor thing, but I don't understand still how she couldn't end up enjoying it. I don't enjoy rape stories, but this one was really well written, and can't really blame the father, though when a woman says no to sex, the man should stop in my own opinion. Fortunately for me I'm not a man to know.

Keep up the good work. Daughter seemed to enjoy it after all if she wants anal.

i thought the part of him doing it even after she said stop made it more real, the poor guy hadnt had sex in yrs just bc he didnt want her seeing other women in the house i think he deserved it spec. after doing the vids for her, would love to read how the hell he fits it in her ass :)

Don't listen to the detractors, keep it up. This story was so fucking hot, I had to read it in parts because I couldn't get through it without cumming.

One constructive critique: I would have preferred a 9 inch cock. At least that is possible. Once you hit double digits it just starts sounding ridiculous.

Please continue writing, you have a gift, and I expect you will only get better!

This is really hot. More chapters, please!

Keep up the good work! That's one hell of a story. My ASS is on the edge for part two.

Can't wait for the anal story....Mmm Mmmmm Mmm

I liked the story the force the loving caring and just giving end awesome hoping for the part 2

It's like this story was written and the put aside for months and months and finally finished. You changed style. The father went from reluctant and caring to sociopathic indifference. He even blamed her for him raping her. The father in the beginning woudl not have blamed her if he lost control, he would have taken blame himself. He also would have stopped the moment he had time to think and he had plenty of moments that came about. Excellent writing, but it felt like 2 different stories melded together.

Well that's gonna hurt like hell

You definitely have loads of talent! Whatever the controversy your writing shows great style. You have a unique voice.

I enjoyed your story right up until the rape and then I stopped reading. Great potential ruined with an unnecessary evil.

Hot up until the nonconsensual bit, then stomach-turning. (And yes, that is rape. She withdrew consent, he continued despite her continued protests. Whether she forgave him later or not, that's real, honest-to-goodness, even-Republicans-would-agree rape-rape.)

It's well written. Definitely not rape. I'd probably run if I get to see such a huge cock so I don't blame him. A lil reluctance added the heat.

The rape ruined an otherwise good story.

well written story, it has potential of a great incest series. More please

A different and enjoyable twist on an old theme. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

This is a rape story. Disgusting. Put a damn warning in the description.

For a first effort this was extremely good, well done you

Great story, awesome writing!!