All Comments on 'Daddy Needs Love Ch. 02'

Great story. They don't get any better than this.

I read both chapters before I commented on this wonderful erotic love story. Keep up the good work.

Loved it! Very romantic and hot!!

He needs to give her a baby bump or two

That was a good story full of passion and lust .

Love this story. But can you please add another chapter wherein she's pregnant with her daddy's baby?

I agree, there should be one last chapter where the daughter gets pregnant by her daddy.

A hot story. Please continue with the characters. You can continue to show the love and closeness between them. She can become pregnant and they become a loving family. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Momma is smarter than both of them put together. She's pretty cold blooded about the whole thing. She's been a master planner and manipulator for the entire marriage. And you don't think that she knew what that little last altercation was really all about or what the implications were? They both might as well have walked in with signs that said whine whine whine on one side and Hey, we're fucking each other you nasty old bitch on the other side.

very touching ending great story

You need to make a clearer demarcation for time jumps. It's jarring. The thing with grace felt pointless, unless it was to just show how dominated Matthew was. It doesn't paint a good picture of the character or engender sympathy or connection. 3*