by Ihopeyouenjoythis
Good start but stopped way too early. So only 3 stars for now. Expand and the rating will climb
5 Stars. I hope there are more chapters. Hoping Mogan calls daddy down after Scott and Rob exit to show him what a big slut his little has become, including having him come inside her. Many more possiblities while she is home and after she goes back to the city. Great start.
Good start! The premise is really great. Could be better, but for a first try it is very promising.
Past tense for kneel is knelt, (says the grammar "notsy"). The story arc has definite promise, though. Good work!
This was a fun read. Not many stories about men watching their daughter's corruption, debauchery or seduction. This is great. Looking forward to more.