All Comments on 'Daddy Satisfies Ch. 02'

by Merlinswand

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Only spoilt by the numerous errors - without those your story would have got a five.

Get a proof reader - or a better one.

MerlinswandMerlinswandalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Daddy Satisfies ch 2

There are many more exciting adventures on the way. Typing as fast as I can and things are definitely going to heat up more!

BigDad69BigDad69almost 9 years ago
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Very good story. Definitely want to read more. Maybe daddy could make her their toy for keeps!

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