All Comments on 'Daddy's Babydoll'

I am so glad to see that you have finally written a story about us, Daddy! I loved it, thank you for sharing it with everyone, including me!

veryy cool story wish it didnt end that short

I love how life like your writing is, when i read it it seems like i am standing there watching everything happen to your slave, then watch you on the other side of line. It is just so enticing and erotic.

I adore role play, favorite is Dom/Daddy. You made my day. I will let my Daddy know to read this one! Might have to call him at lunch and read it to him. giggles

hugs

After reading this story, I got so wet that I am just going to play with YOUR pussy Daddy. I hope that you give me the same punishment. I am going to try to fist myself now.

very hot story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we both loved it till the end, the incest part didn't excite us, until then it was awesome and she's soaked asking me if its ok to cum now

Didn't like it. It was well written but just little things bothered me. Like calling it a 'clitty' sounds just a little to childish and the thought of her 'bowels tingling' and the sentence 'pulled on the nipples UPON your titties'... seriously? Sorry, just ended up being a huge turn off for me. You're a talented writer, just not a good story in my opinion.