All Comments on 'Daddy's Big Girl'

by EdwardMidweston

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joemac77792064joemac77792064almost 12 years ago
I quit

I quit reading when I hit the 34DDD or was it 34DDDD tits. Yes, it is usually a fantasy but not for me

cassiekravesitcassiekravesitalmost 12 years ago

If this storywas inspired by Caroline, 34-DDD could be true!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Huh???

This is a stream of consciousness entry. There are many, many problems with it. For one, she's 22 and married, but we don't meet the husband. Speaking of which, is Daddy spending the night???

The Daddy here needs many many years of therapy, as I suspect of the author.

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1almost 12 years ago
Dont listen

pretty good story a bit of a push but dont listen to the negative people. 34DDD is very believable. keep up the work

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You are missing big points and lost a reader

Never finished.

REALLY?

And ASS to PUSSY causes infections, wow, um do some research and clear up your structuring. Try to NOT masturbate as you write and your head may think clearer. Also, ask someone to proof your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I loved it. I love sex. I've got a big cock,I love showing it off,and of course sticking it in every hole a woman has,including her Tits

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