All Comments on 'Daddy's Desires Ch. 01'

half way thru it started over with her coming in the door.

There was a great start, but it ended way to quickly. If this is a story with multiple chapters, I would have hoped to get at least one complete scene finished instead of leaving the characters hanging so literally

This story started out as a text to Daddy, hence the reason it is so short. He liked it so much he thought I should publish it. I always do what Daddy's tells me.

I AM aware of the problem with it starting over. I am not sure why it posted that way. I have reviewed my original and it doesn't show that problem there. I have alerted the powers that be regarding the matter and submitted another copy.

There will be much more to come. I plan to elaborate on this story a lot in the future. I am working on more now.

Thank you everyone!