All Comments on 'Daddy's Girl'

I really loved it!!! I'm still a virgin, and I like to read stuff that have virgins in it, but this was really good!!!! Thank you for making me cum!!!!!

That was awesome! You need to write so much more!! I love the way you describe the Oral scenes - that's just amazing! You're an incredible writer and you need to write more stories like this!!!

Love your incestuous mind, especially daddy daughter fucking. Makes me hard, makes women wet. Good stuff.

Several moments ago I wrote a very positive, except for two issues, of this well written story. The story is emotionally put together, from the perspective of the characters and their roles. It is for the most part a well thought out, but quick synopsis of a father and daughter incestual relationship!

My two issues are 1) There is no final details of "Barbie" Rachel being dismissed from the story (and thus the lives of Brittany and her father! And 2) the worst of the worst is, although the story is very good up through the foreplay and the initial penetration of her father's cock into her pussy, at that point their affair IS NOT consumatted nor finished--they fought the battle but lost the war!!! He, the father, pulled his dick out and deposited it into her mouth and throat. That's known as non-consummated cohabiting coitus! That is no better than a stiff dildo or a weimpy vibrator.

Several moments ago I wrote a very positive, except for two issues, of this well written story. The story is emotionally put together, from the perspective of the characters and their roles. It is for the most part a well thought out, but quick synopsis of a father and daughter incestual relationship!

My two issues are 1) There is no final details of "Barbie" Rachel being dismissed from the story (and thus the lives of Brittany and her father! And 2) the worst of the worst is, although the story is very good up through the foreplay and the initial penetration of her father's cock into her pussy, at that point their affair IS NOT consumatted nor finished--they fought the battle but lost the war!!! He, the father, pulled his dick out and deposited it into her mouth and throat. That's known as non-consummated cohabiting coitus! That is no better than a stiff dildo or a weimpy vibrator.

I liked it. Good fast pace. N more on the girlfriend .

Father and daughter needed to follow through to more

scenes .