All Comments on 'Daddy's Late Night Surprise Ch. 01'

Such a good little slut for Daddy!

Wonderful writing

More please

I loved it!

..... And now my dick is hard!

Looking forward to more

A good story maybe daddy should use her last virgin hole next round

Great story! Something quick and easy! Right to the point!

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing and posting it. There is a tense mixture. Here’s an example from your last paragraph.

‘Brittany is exhausted…’

It would flow better with - ‘Brittany was exhausted as she felt her daddy pick her up, carry her upstairs, and lay hef gently in her bed. He kissed her forehead and left her satisfied.’

Just my opinion. Thanks again for writing it.

Yeah, right, as if.

Goes from 0-60 in 0.01 seconds, thanks to rushed effort and a Martian Slut Ray for daughters? Why bother if you're going to phone it in?

looking forward to more!

I wish this happened to me

Sure, would like another one, very good!

It's not the next great novel, but definitely boner-inspiring. More please?

I enjoyed it. :)

Wow. Stupid slut. I would never want to know such a dumb whore.