by Rallynoangels
I like the way the wife is being incorporated into the fun. Can't wait to see how they progress.
I enjoyed the story, especially how mommy was brought into the fun! But Daddy is so mean!!! He let her cry so many times without reassuring her (well at least not to my personal liking) and I wish he would have cuddled her and told her how she was such a good girl and that he loved her so much more because (as it is obvious in the story ending) she really loves him and needs this reassurance from him and the love she has clrealy been starved of! Just my own little critiques but great story nonetheless!
Good end, but I could’ve used an epilogue, maybe with Carly rocking the crib of the baby