All Comments on 'Daddy's Princess'

by hellbound_heart

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
incredible story

this story is fucking incredible . . . . there are a few typos and word choice errors, but they do not detract from the story

. . . . . . . . . . . . I am guessing you are writing this story from personal experience (or you have dissected the brain of someone who has experienced it) . . some of the things you portray, only a member of this very special community would know about . . .

how do I know . . . . I have been a Daddy . . for 6 years now . . and there is no other relationship that is as special as Daddy/lil girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
series

dude, you SOOOOO need to aek a sequel, this is soo awsome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
no grammer

The first thing I read was

"you was."

I'm a redneck but know enough grammer to say "you were." Didn't read any further for more disapointment

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh wow

This blew my brain. It was so awesome. I wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
thank you

that was really really hot, despite the spelling,grammar stuff. And the capitalization of "you" really annoyed me. But it's the exact relationship i have with my daddy

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Semi literate clap-trap

If you're going to try and write stories, at least write in half way decent English.

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