by hellbound_heart
this story is fucking incredible . . . . there are a few typos and word choice errors, but they do not detract from the story
. . . . . . . . . . . . I am guessing you are writing this story from personal experience (or you have dissected the brain of someone who has experienced it) . . some of the things you portray, only a member of this very special community would know about . . .
how do I know . . . . I have been a Daddy . . for 6 years now . . and there is no other relationship that is as special as Daddy/lil girl
The first thing I read was
"you was."
I'm a redneck but know enough grammer to say "you were." Didn't read any further for more disapointment
that was really really hot, despite the spelling,grammar stuff. And the capitalization of "you" really annoyed me. But it's the exact relationship i have with my daddy
If you're going to try and write stories, at least write in half way decent English.