All Comments on 'Daddy's Summer Slave'

nasty story. keep on writing.

Actually, from what I've seen on this site, this is the ONLY category this could have been in. Incest seems to trump everything else. Even if it is the most intense BDSM story, making BDSM relation also an incestuous one automatically places the story in the Incest/Taboo category.

Although I am not really into BSDM and can't give it more than a 50, it is pretty well written. The story flows well and is literately written. Keep it up!!

I agree re: categories. I wish Literotica would allow dual categories: Incest/Gay, Incest/BSDM, etc. but I doubt that it will happen.

Omfg you're a great writer! This was amazing!! I've literally read hundreds of stories on here for the past few years and this is definitely one of my favorites. It's so similar to what I have with my Dom. The detail is impeccable (detail is very important to me). The power dynamics are incredible here. 5/5! Please keep writing, kudos! :)

Fantastic writing I only wish I could write this well.

How about more to the story line! What happens while they are shopping? At Dinner?

Would love to read more of this story line.

Loved loved loved it! Well, what I could get through anyway, can't wait to read the rest. This is gonna keep my interest for weeks to come! ;)

This was much better than your latest story, it makes me wonder if you rushed that one. I look forward to the rest of this series!

A really good father/daughter sex story.''Just how many times can he make his little girl come though?

I couldn't put it down! I love the daddy/daughter play and would love to be used in a playroom like this one. My pussy needs to be touched now....excuse me... ;) *giggle*

It was way to much "Oh Baby" and "Oh Daddy!" sugary sweetness that doesn't mesh with reality. However, you did bring in how much he has wanted to have sex with his daughter. Though the years and length of time, and if she is only 18, and it's her birthday he couldn't have wanted it and waited for it for 20 years, so some of the timelines mentioned were off. Over all it was Daddy wanted to fuck his baby girl and he did, turning her into his cum slut whore with a D/s twist. Just the wording and expressiveness of the two involved left a lot to be desired. Nobody is that sugary sweet when they are going to take their daughters virginity whether she likes it or not and the daughter was a bit to Polyanna.

having gone through some thing similar i agree with the person that said "too much "oh daddy" "oh baby girl". also just a few points 1) the master puts the collar on the submissive it is something that carries a lot of meaning. it is a throw away here. you cheapen the experience for us in the lifestyle. 2) he is not very creative. i am putting in your mouth, now your cunt, now your ass. If he had been holding back it would have been a blur of movement and premature ejaculation. 3) i understand the morality of having the story taking place after her 18th birthday but if it was going to happen and she was not the aggressor it would have happened earlier. i had my first experience with my "special person at 16 but i must say i can see the game beginning much earlier.. the foreplay for a lack of a better term took 6 years or longer. 4) both people have over whelming guilt unless they are sociopaths. it may continue and grow and the guilt is pushed aside, but to pretend it never happened. my "special person" was playing with the idea for quite a while before we went all in, but even with the seduction and the building toward it i know after my "special person" didnt talk to me for days, until his dick had the attention and his soul didnot and for me to speak up. sorry i talked to much

She's doing nothing that any whore daughter shouldn't do. Worship the cock and balls that made them. I'll check back and see if dad starts using her for breeding.

You did cover just about every sex act Daddies fantasize about with their hot, fuck-meat daughters. And it IS well written. But somehow I don't see a bond between them... Maybe it's just me.

Liked the idea of the story.

Agree too much "Oh Baby" and "Oh Daddy and use of "fuck slave", "whore" etc. Repetitious. Gratuitously over used. Not lending itself well to the story. Good premise for a story. Could have better flow. Very rushed. Ec

Events could have been spread out over time. Daughter was too "willing". Didnt like her explaining what was happening through dialog when it could have been or was written better through your prose.

Rushed the story, no question about what a slave is or anything. She had no hymen for him to break. 9" cock can not go all the way in any pussy, unless severe damage is done..then thinking instAnt loving 9" cock and no pain or discomfort after is bullshit. Big dicks don't make better story besides women want width over length