by Zorroscamp
This was a really good story. Tilly's parents were bitches and they needed to be shot. I love all of your other stories. Keep'em comin'!
That cant be the end! After reading that you only want to read more. Where is the rest of the story?
That was so hot. The way he praised her, showed pride in her ability to take him all in...the loving connection, it was all so enjoyable to read.
This story, it is making me wonder what has happened to them both, did he take her away from that dreadful place or what. Left me in limbo land. Well done well written, kudos my friend!!!!!
This can't be the end. You have to keeo writing and tell us your readers what happens to them. We have to know.
Damn, that was sweet and hot too!! Yeah, her 'parents' need to die! Especially the step-father!! Bad enough moms a total bitch, but you'd think the guy would have taken pity on the poor girl and gave her some attention growing up. Not like she was a problem child or anything, yeesh! Well at least she gets to live happily ever after with daddy as soon as they move out! :)
Amazing, well written story! But...like so many other authors on here, PLEASE learn where the hymen is!!
Dearest Zorroscamp,
Damn, damn, damn! This is incredibly sexy. I think I'll read another of your entries now. I can sleep later!
GG
Please do not leave us hanging there. Finish where Paul puts
the bitch in her place and Tilly Rose leaves with him and how
happy they are.