by beaverhunt
I've read a lot of horrible stories on this site but this slop ranks up in the top 10 WORST. Childish plot inane dialogue even worse sex scenes. Please stop publishing garbage like this until you grow up and get an editor.
Colossal waste of a star
DragonRider55
Worth repeating:
"I've read a lot of horrible stories on this site but this slop ranks up in the top 10 WORST. Childish plot inane dialogue even worse sex scenes. Please stop publishing garbage like this until you grow up and get an editor."
Anon posted the same drivel twice, but the 2nd chapter has been viewed by over 200 people and has a rating of 4.33. Your full of shit and wouldn't know a good story if it bit you in the ass.