All Comments on 'Daemour Castle Nights Ch. 01'

Good start - this story was well written and imaginative. But you ended it right in the middle of a 'scene'! Please continue ... don't leave your readers hanging like that! (The weird underlines on the first page are due to some faulty HTML coding and have nothing to do with the story)

This is great.

I enjoyed your tale very much, but it was confusing at times. It would flip back and forth between characters points of views a lot without any separation of clarification. Other than that, it was wonderful and my soaking pussy and I enjoyed it.