All Comments on 'Daisies in July'

Thank you for your writing.

Beautiful story!!! Loved it,very many thanks.

So glad to find another story from you. I have thoroughly enjoyed every one. I very much hope that you are back with another soon. Thank you so much.

Beautiful story!

Boyd Percy

A life and its love story condensed into 5 pages!

Magnificent indeed.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Literotica is the land of fantasy and this story is indeed fantasy. Everything (aside from the death of Lisa's parents) is part of a fantasy ride through a land of happiness. The author and we the readers can take this ride without embarassment because it is the land of fantasy and we can indulge ourselves. To top it off the writing is excellent and has just the right amount of detail. Even the dialog (where many authors here fall short) runs very smoothly. In a 5 page story I'll usually skip some tedious parts, but here I read every word. I found myself hoping that nothing would happen to upset this happiness fantasy and indeed nothing did. Maybe, just maybe, some of it can leak out of the pages and into the real world. I can dream, can't I? 5*, of course.

JFremont does Romance superbly, and the Romance category contains what I classify as the nicest stories (and usually most enjoyable) in Literotica. This was another well-crafted and well-written addition to JF's set of contributions.

I find it sad when excellent authors such as JF don't give any information about themselves in their biographical notes. I find that it adds considerably to my enjoyment of their story contributions to know something about the author and what influences them. (It's only with authors who write what I think are good stories that I go to the biog notes, thus my disappointment to find that JF tells us nothing about him/her self.)

Lue

of that very sad but optimistic Carter family song 'Will the Circle Be Unbroken'. Thank you for the lovely story.

@jfremont - i think this is a beautifully written story, full of positivity, which we surely need in this angst ridden world we have at the moment.

Thank you! Am thinking up my happy valley of flowers right now!

𝐅𝐑𝐎𝐍𝐓𝐒𝐇𝐈𝐓, 𝐒𝐖𝐈𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐑𝐅𝐀𝐆, 𝐂𝐀𝐑𝐎𝐋𝐈𝐍𝐀𝐂𝐔𝐂𝐊, 𝐋𝐔𝐄𝐂𝐔𝐍𝐓 and all the usual morons: FUCK YOU AND YOUR MORONIC, ANNOYING COMMENTS. DIE SOON AND HARD.

I agree that the story can stand alone but, as I said, when it is a good and well-written story I find it enhances the story to know a little about the influences felt by the author when writing it. I also look at what a good author lists as his/her favourite stories and authors.

Readers know what influenced Shakespeare. Readers know what influenced Mark Twain. And so on. It helps readers who are interested to appreciate their stories that much more. If it doesn't interest you, Floribunda and Anonymouse, so be it.

Lue

Thank you for this beautiful story. It was a pleasure to read. I LOVED it!

after 3 pages. glacial pacing left me without the ability or desire to see it thru to the end

Any story, any writer, has about 10 to 15 paragraphs to “hook” me. If you can’t do it in 15 paragraphs, at most, I just won’t waste any more time on it. This story may win a Pulitzer Prize for short stories, but I’ll never know.

After a trip to the valley, Amber might get a baby brother. Hmm...that seems likely for this romantic couple. It's great they have their own private valley to make babies in.

Page 1 and skipped to 5. Same story different names. Still game it a 5☆