All Comments on 'Daisy'

by JulianDelacourt

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sexy Nash and Daisy

Loved their descriptions -- how his sexy chest hair grazes her nipples, how she strokes his hairy arms and imagines a hairy beast. It helped in her healing.

Bi47Bi47about 4 years ago
Excellent

Very good thank you.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

I though Nash might run into Ennis when he dropped her off. Great story!

linnearlinnearabout 4 years ago
Nice One

Nice short story, I wanted more by the end but I'm a sucker for the happily ever after endings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
April fools?

I’m not sure I know how this fits the theme.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sexy for sure, but not sure what the April fool's trick was...

... And the switching around between past/present tenses gave me whiplash. I'd say, take the piece back and put a little more time into it, and it'll be a fun read.

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