All Comments on 'Daisy Mae Corday's Terrible Ordeals'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 5 years ago
Tibetan monks.......

and their 12" cocks.....!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A women who enjoyed forced sex

One star. Error in synopsis

A women who enjoyed forced sex ....

A WOMEN WHO . Ffs

Women who....

Or

Some women .....

Or perhaps you mean

A WOMAN ( singular woman as in one of them.)

WOMEN (PLURAL A NUMBER GREATER THAN ONE TWO FOR EXAMPLE BUT NOT ONE !)

Gods only know how piss poor the rest of the writing is as i could not read further in fear of what horrors the text would contain

Re upload with the correction and ill try to read it and.perhaps many more.

erectus123erectus123over 5 years agoAuthor
ok, So I made a typo, sorry

was rushed to get story in on time. Forgive me. Ok shoot me. Make me a sex slave to a hundred Lesbian WOMEN, not just one WOMAN. Listen I didn't learn English until I was 13 years old. Only spoke Irish dialect. It ain't easy. Ok, so when do the 100 fems arrive?

erectus123erectus123over 5 years agoAuthor
Dear Ashesh9

Thank you for taking the time to read my silly story. May God bless you and yours and may you find all the happiness sex has to offer.

Kinkycouple2017Kinkycouple2017over 5 years ago
Good work wrong catagory

Don’t listen to these idiots correcting your spelling or grammar lord knows I stopped writing because of that ,and sensorship on my pictures . That being said if you understand the story who cares. Anyway,I like true forced sex,blackmail,humiliation,where there is absolutely no enjoyment for the woman.

This is really not non consensual at all,but it’s well written . Also anyone who criticizes your work as anonymous has no balls so disregard them .

maddictmaddictover 5 years ago
Whew

A whirling dervish, I'm still trying to get a handle on how that can happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great sex stuff

erectus123erectus123almost 2 years agoAuthor

yes -i agree!

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