by Daddysslut221
Lovely continuation from the first chapter. Love how we stick close to Jenny312’s perspective and really feel everything she feels. Love how the world expands in real time. Everything happening in chronological order really helps the total immersion experience the author provides, and new details about this wonderful new world come out gradually, we are never overwhelmed. And then suddenly we are confronted with raw, electric eroticism. It feels natural and realistic, a considerable accomplishment in the HuCow genre.
Some favorite lines: “She could see women being roughly fucked by farmhands as a strange machine milked their breasts.”; “ . . . your transition from person to cow.”; and many more.
So many surprises; the eroticism is hot, love how everything happens naturally but unexpectedly. 3200 words and every one counts! Good job!