by basicbitch
Please learn about BDSM and everything else you wrote about here. So obvious you I know nothing of the lifestyle. Your stories could be really hot if you made them believable and accurate. You've had 13 chapters to learn and keep getting worse
This has been an interesting story. I am not sure I find it believable that he would do all this and not get at least head from her, but still I am enjoying it. Keep it up
Just keep on writing. I am interested to see what will happen at the end.