All Comments on 'Dakota Learns She's Submissive Pt. 01'

by LAHomedog

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Hot

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

He needs to share her.

LT_BookwormLT_Bookwormabout 3 years ago

Holy crap this was hot! 5 stars!

Please continue!

Ravey19Ravey19about 3 years ago
Short But A Hot Start

Hot intro. Settling down a bit so will wait to see how it develops.

LAHomedogLAHomedogabout 3 years agoAuthor

Ravey19 -- Thank you for reading my story and your comment. I have submitted an edited version of this story for publication. I will be interested in your thoughts after you read the new draft.

LAHomedogLAHomedogover 2 years agoAuthor

This is my favorite concept and story arc and Dakota is my favorite character that I have ever written. I stopped writing it because despite the nice comment below, it was so poorly received by the Lit readers. If I had some support to go forward with the story I would love to. I think Dakota has a lot of room to grow and learn as she begins to explore who she really is and her life going forward.

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I love writing, telling stories, and sex. So, Literotica is the ideal intersection for me. Thank you for taking the time to read my stories. It doesn't matter the category, I write love stories. I believe in love and I believe it shows up in many different ways. But love ...