All Comments on 'Dakota Performs on Stage Pt. 01'

Some people in this story have some serious mental issues. They are sick in the head.

I speak of Clive who wants to fuck his son, Lily who wants to do the same, and dear ole Mom, Connie, who also wants a piece of Dakota.

Just where these sickos will lead Dakota remains to be seen. I hope for some drama young Dakota wakes up to the fact that the people he trusts the most are exploiting and sexually using him for their sick games. Then l hope he reacts accordingly and furiously revenges himself against the users.

So far 3/5

Great story! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Very well written.

Katy gave him a great blowjob and sucked his ass? One would think that she was not too active in that regard as she has been with Dakota for 18 months and has done nothing with him like this before? Sounds a bit off. Dakota may have a bit of a problem later on during the performance since he may be thinking of what just happened.

Paper towels? You use a towel there dude. Also, show it don't say it.

Somewhat interesting, but Dakota appears to be a little 'teacher's. If not a simpleton. Luckily he has lots of folks that want to take him to 'O-VILLE'.

Have fun Dakota!

Thanks for sharing this story.

Too gay!

It was fun until the Lily and Katy part, they ruined it.