All Comments on 'Dakota's Surprise Pt. 03'

Well I didn't see that coming!! The rape or the pregnancy. Wow! Blowers mind but still is it Dakota's or someone else's?? Can't stop here!!

What a cliffhanger to leave us on . I love this type of story . You have built the characters ups so well . Well done and thank you so much . Can’t wait till the next part is published ... x

As the others said, what a cliffhanger!!! Beautiful series, so well written, personal and hot at the same time. Just love it.

xoxo,

Di

This story is so well thought out and written. The dialogue between Hailey and Dakota flows so easily and comes across so realistically that I hear the conversation in my head as though it is happening right in front of me which I find fairly rare and very exciting.

This cliffhanger went a completely different way than I thought which made it even more exciting.

I look forward to the next chapter(s).