All Comments on 'Damn Red Shoes'

Without touching myself, this story made me as hard as possible. Another chapter would be good.

I really liked this story.

love to do but are too damned scared to try. He's sticking his hard young cock up between his mother's legs and blowing his hot young balls up the same cunt he came out of. This boy knows where his semen belongs.

Many guys in similar situation jo for both mom and sis. Teasing sometimes leads to more with various levels of activity usually not going all the way.

Now that they have crossed that taboo line and had sex, what is going to happen next?

Thanks for the read.

More please!

love the detail

it was a little lack lustered, she basically came home from the date and fucked him, no events in between

Needed some build up and gentle seduction. This reads as if she had already decided she was going to get her son to fuck her and just went for it.

It would have been more logical to blame the shoes if she had stumbled and accidentally brushed against his hard on. Then she could have asked him why he had an erection, and hearing that it was how she affected him she could have started thinking along the same lines about him.

That would lay the groundwork for a shyly hesitant mutual seduction.

A 5-inch heel? Sounds a little painful. But a black dress w/ red heels? Very hot.

It was to quick. There wasn't enough build to the story. Also add the daughter for more fun.

I agree there needs to be a chapter 2 and maybe more in this well done story. Otherwise, I think you are quite good at this. Welcome to the site.

Very well written, this story line could go for awhile with your talents and the ability to weave each character in & out with Mom as the focal point. Ya gotta love red hot MaMas late 30's to the mid 50's, especially when they know what they want and can wear the right clothes to get the party started. I used to work part-time as a security supervisor at a concert venue, 25 & under females didn't cut it but the red hot MaMas damn straight.

Kokomo we need to see you add more to this!! Please!

Just about to cum reading this hot mom/son story. Couldn't wait to see how it was going to end on page 2 only to find there wasn't a page 2! Kind of an abrupt ending. Hope further chapters will be forthcoming.

Well told story Nice plot and held the readers interest to the end all my friends mums were never like these worse Luke

Good story. Logical plot development. I thoroughly enjoyed the sensual chemistry and romantic intimacy fepicted between mother and son. I liked the fact that the mother is self-aware with a firm ego. She has the ability to see her son as a man without threat to her position as mother. She knows she can be both. She knows, without reservation, that her son only wants to provide the security, safety and love she wants and needs. Would like this story to become a series.

A terrifically sexy first chapter. Years later, where's chapter two?

Continue please.