All Comments on 'Dan and the Bottle Ch. 16'

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Sid0604Sid0604almost 10 years ago
Thank you...

Welcome back. Another great chapter to add to an enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
being picky

Sorry nit picking, but thought Chinese hinds had a troom capacity of 5-8 having 3 to drop ten troops seems a bit excessive.

disableddandisableddanalmost 10 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous

I figured as much, but I tend to be, as Montgomery Scott would call it, a wee bit conservative, at least on paper.... and these days, looking up some things on the internet will get you put on some NSA Red flag watch list.... so sometimes I just wing it. No offense intended to those who know better.... and a Chinese version of the 'Hind' might be a bit different from the Russian version I'm a shade more familiar with.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
New chapter

Great to have a new chapter of your fascinating story to read.

disableddandisableddanalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Chapter 17

It's been submitted, folks, just waiting for approval; I'm starting work on #18 today. Yup, more to come, stay tuned.

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