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by DanStanding

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Typo

You might want to fix the typo of 'waste' to 'waist'

"...and no sooner had she ripped off her top when suddenly her waste sucks in and her ass starts to overflow her thong!"

Sucking waste in kinda sounds ALL wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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