by Sunset99
Let me see, she has had two kids, but your fat dick permenantly stretched her pussy after one night?
Let's see, this is really a rape by noname little dick! How erotic. Not!
Have you even had sex?
The writing is juvenile and lacking of any reality.
Get laid, then try writing again.
Best. Story. Ever. Write one where he goes back and fucks her till
She dies.
I read the story and I read the comments. Every comment has some validity .... I guess - but sheesh lighten up people. I enjoyed the story.... after all the stories here are fiction.... what a reader imagines in their mind is the ultimate proof I guess.... Like all fiction, accuracy isn't guaranteed but as they say "don't let the truth get in the way of a good story".
I give credit to the writer for putting it out there for our enjoyment!
Thanks Sunset99
That 30 minute stretch killied it. Just unrealistic unless he was circumcised. And just because she came, doesn't mean she was fucking enjoying it. These stories need to be a bit more thought out to be believable even if it's just fantasy!! Excuse the contradiction.
Stretched her out so the next guy thought she was too loose. Maybe an anatomy class is in order. The story otherwise was ok.