All Comments on 'Dancing with Mom Ch. 03'

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indigodragonindigodragonover 17 years ago
why so short?

you have a good story going here. but, why is each chapter so short?why not put them all together, and make a nice long read.ugh, his dad eating a cream pie? not good.keep the sex between just the mom and son, but keep the danger factor of getting caught.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
It's short but rather good

I don't really think a threesome is the outlet of this wonderful story. Rather I it is interesting to see the mother torn between her two dearest persons she loved so much. Let's us feel her joys, plains and dilemma. It's a challenge to the author. as well as a improvement to those shallow readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Make it a series...part 4..5...6

I would love to read more on that father eating his son cum of his Mom pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
more family trio

hot having dad eat mom's pussy full of son's thick balljuice.now have dad and son plow mom together.and dad and son suck cock coated with cum and pussyjuices.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow

all I can say is wow I enjoyed every word pleas write more storys about sons fucking there mother i wish you good luck in your next storys

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
much too short

basic story line is good , i like the riskiness but the sex needs to be longer and more detailed revealing not just the sex but the love involved between mom and son

BillyFBillyFover 17 years ago
Dancing with Mom

I enjoyed so far as it went... It's a little slow and the chapters are short... The part about Dad eating Mark's cum out of his Mom's pussy was a sweet treat but there is so much more that you do with this please write more you can do with this subject... So try it... BillyF

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
She made her husband a cum eating cuckold

It's really hot reading about his dad eating his cum out of his mom's cunt. He needs to keep her pussy well filled with his cum now.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 14 years ago
Good beginning

Good beginning to what could be a continuing story of Mark's sexual education. Develop the story more along its natural path.

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleabout 12 years ago
Lucky son...

...and lucky dad to get to eat those juices out of mom!

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
WHAT A JOKE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS SERIES SUCKED ,YOU COULD HAVE PUT IT ALL TOGETHER IN ONE SHORT STORY INSTEAD .THE COMMENTS WOULD HAVE BEEN LESS PAINFUL..............LAROC OF AGES

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great series of short stories!

And it's great that Mark makes his dad eat his boy's cum out of his mother's cunt. Next, dad gets his boy's cream from the source, and discovers his inner cocksucker. Between his mother's twat and his father's mouth, Mark's gonna have his young balls drained on a daily basis. But the boy's got plenty more where that came from.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AS I TOLD YOU BEFORE, THERE IS NO PUSSY LIKE MOTHER'S PUSSY!

In public he is her son. Period.

When they are alone, he is the SON WITH BENEFITS!

A very lucky mother fucker! (Yes, i do envy him, OK?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mum

It is said "that a man is is born of a vagina and then spends his life trying to get up one"

This lad is trying to get backup the the original vagina he arrived in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
☆☆☆☆☆- [(5-) 4.65/5.0 = 93% = A]

An excellent story!

I am glad the author split the storyline into 3 short chapers that can be read either as a series or separately.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Really LOVE it: ❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

Very erotic.

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