All Comments on 'Danger Zone Ch. 03'

but could you make them a little longer? I'm dying to read more and I keep running into a dead end!!! More please..SOON! =^_^= PK

Your story is great and so enthralling, I just need MORE haha I am addicted.

i really like this story, but, they're short chapters. just when i start to really get into it, it'v over and when you add a new one, i have to go back and reread the previous chapter to remember what's going on. could you please submit longer chapters, i can handle waiting a little longer for them. otherwise i think this is an excellent story. thanks so much!

but I wish the chapters were longer. Thanks for writing though, and I'll look forward to more.

Please post more

your intro I can only hope that you are back from your break. Now that I'm catching up I would hate to have stop reading. Having said that I know that life has a way of getting in the way of writing. I hope you are able to continue because the more I read the more I want to know what happens next.....

The fact that someone slingshots a thong in this story is pretty impressive.