All Comments on 'Daniel and Sara Pt. 01'

A great first story looking forward to part 2

Good start to a very promising series. The exploration can go all over the sexual map.

All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited sex.

Can't wait for part two

Please don't stop here. Want to read more.

That was incredibly hot.

Certainly one of the most intimate and endearing Father-Daughter stories I have ever read. Sincerely hope you continue the story, and Thanx for the Read!

I would say to alwaystaboo, that as the father of a very pretty daughter and a grown granddaughter, fantasy is one thing, but I never once thought about either one of them in a sexual way. The very thought of it makes me feel sick to my stomach.

I would rather cut off my arm that use it in such a betraying manner. Most people are completely disgusted with such thought about their immediate family members. There's a good reason for that old joke that goes: It would be like kissing your sister. I once heard a doctor explain that we have a chemical reaction that normally prevents these incestuous feelings. Love the fiction, though.

I'd like to thank everyone for the positive feedback. Pt. 2 is already submitted, waiting for approval and should be up tomorrow, I'd guess. I also want to make VERY clear that this is strictly a work of fantasy, complete fiction. I don't even have children, though I'm married. So enjoy, I plan at least one more chapter, perhaps more, and other works are in my mind, but they are all fiction only.

needs a lot of work, sorry

PhineasN why don't you be specific about your issues with the story? I don't mind criticism but it really should be constructive and specific. And you seem to be in the minority. Tell me what you didn't like and maybe I can address it in the future.

I love this. I would have expected some visual teasing before they got down to business. That just seemed a bit quick.

Ah... what do I know. You're the author, I'm just the perv reading this.

On to chapter two.

Reminded me when my one and only daughter Kerry Lynn slept

with me as I gave her birthday present when she turned 21. She had

the sweetest pussy I ever ate.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the saga. Your character development and points of discovery bring back some terrific memories. Thanks.