by markchamberlain
I enjoyed your story a lot. I also liked the disclaimer at the beginning. Thanks.
I see you have not posted for 15 years. You will probably never see this. But I want you to know I think your story was incredibly well-written! You captured The Wonder of early discovery. You also captured the sadness of a passionless marriage. Thank you for writing your story.
Dude, you are the best writer on this whole site! What a gift!