by hrshie40
did you have to mention twice that she had a 42D breast? it detracted from the story. the narration and dialogue were also very clinical, lacking in passion.
that would mean that she is really thick around the ribcage...then you were saying that she was slim and muscular...surely you meant 32D? i'll give you the benefit of the doubt. the plot was good, but it could have been developed a whooooooooooole lot more.