All Comments on 'Dani's New Life Ch. 01'

by Lauries Husband

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duke111duke111about 17 years ago
Please more

Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
How Uncomfortable

Wrong pew or just sickly sub cucking with more absurdities to follow. This was written well in and of itself but in a language foreign to anyone with any small degree of sanity.-------.

Humiliation and sadism is lower than mouse turds except for those who must roll in them to get excited - and isn't that pitifully sad - writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
excellent

This is your best story so far.It has excellent potential for the most erotic experiences.I trust that if exposure and submission excite your young lawyer she is treated to an overload by her pimp.

bear2readbear2readover 16 years ago
Superbly told

This story is developing into one of the hottest I've read on this site. Dani's exploration into her hidden desires is presented in a very tasteful yet highly erotic fashion by the author; one never feels that normal sense of betrayal because of the way the author introduces the husband and their history with each other. Hopefully, Chapter 3 won't be that far down the road. Can't wait to see what Alan has in store for her with his sales group.

PolyVoyeurPolyVoyeurover 13 years ago
wow

I am simply speechless. Hot erotic story with great build up

Jorgy444Jorgy444over 12 years ago
Very Erotic

Thoroughly enjoyed this story, you framed the scenes with great writing and

described the characters superbly. Can not wait for the next chapter in Dani's

surrender to Alan.

Thanks for sharing your stories!

Steve150177Steve150177about 10 years ago
This series stats out OK, but goes too far

It is my opinion that the Dom in a relationship of this sort has a duty to either protect her career or provide for her support.

In this case, her promising legal career is worth millions in a law suit, say wrongful death.

She trusts the wrong man and shouldn't have.

By the end Alan has destroyed her career. And then it just ends. Maybe Laurie's Husband realized his mistake too late.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
story line

so much for being a lawyer with brains between her legs and preditor look for a cheap whore lol good job its just a story hate to have her running my corporation law

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