All Comments on 'Dani's Surprise'

Will there be more of a "birthday surprise?" I hope so.

Great story...actually three in one! Wonderful writing

Really made me hot. More.....More......More

write more on this story please

I hope that Danielle and her mother act out this latest story of Kyle's

i only gave you a 25% rating even though it was a good story but you get a low rating for not finishing the story if you had continued it would have been much higherit would have been better if you hadn't even posted it at all

Great story..got a big thrill reading it...more please