All Comments on 'Danny'

But I think it belongs in Humor.

Nothing else.

stupid cuck shit.

A weird read.

I gave this piece of dung a one star rating, which it deserved.

Ha ha.

bonnietaylor2 Was your father fag cuckold and the sperm donor was one of the bulls of your mom?

is all I can say. You are a pretty good writer, but no beginning, nor ending, of the drama that is their relationship. YOu have Forrest Gump aw shucks fucking her, blowing him, fucking his ass, this shoulda been in gay. No wood here, nor dramatic tension.

What's the matter Bonnie? Get up on the wrong side of the bed? Couldn't find a derelict bum willing to suck your latest gang bang out of your diseased cunt? Or just being your normal sweet self?

fuck you in the heart annony you cock sucking fag

Stupid, but funny.

So no one needs to read this lousy story. Awful writing. Dialogue supplied by a 12 year old. The style and pace of the writing just made the whole mess worse. Really, really bad.

A good parody about bulls...3*