All Comments on 'Danny and Elise Ch. 04'

Needs to move on 4 chapters of no action does not make good reading

I strongly disagree with the comment already posted about 4 chapters and no action. I think the pacing is slow, deliberate and extremely well done. I know I'm being toyed with, and that's part of the fun.

Writing is difficult. Each person has their own style. This author seems to have a clear idea of what needs to be done to tell the story the way it needs to be told. The rest of us are arm chair quarterbacks. I have much more fun reading the story and letting the author take me where the author wants to lead.

THANKS for the fun read.

I agree with RRC2. I know how difficult it is to write after 19 much longer chapters and still working on #20.

I like the way the story is going.