All Comments on 'Danny and Elise Ch. 05'

the individual chapters are too short, I'd say roughly by half. That turned 5***** into 4**** for each, at least for me.

The story line is good but reading such short pages one at a time makes bad reading.

What you have wrote to date is good but should have been one chapter

Thanks for the feedback. I have combined several chapters together for the most recent chapter. It's just how I wrote the story originally. Plus, it seems like so many people have the attention spans of goldfish nowadays that I thought shorter chapters would be better. I'm still figuring out my "audience" on hear, so again, I appreciate the feedback! I will go with longer chapters for now. :)