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As he sketched out a vision of stolen mornings saltwater air and bookshelves filled with more poetry than physics texts the tension slowly drained away. It wasn't a perfect plan nor a guaranteed happily-ever-after. But it held the promise of being wildly recklessly theirs. Anya with her defiant spirit, and him, with his newfound thirst for the unexpected - a combustible combination that could set both their worlds ablaze.
The hedge fund buyout the whispers the clash of their worlds were mere obstacles now, challenges to be tackled together. Anya his fiery dancer was right. They were brilliant on their own but together perhaps they could create a kind of wild, beautiful symphony that defied all expectations.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agowmjm54 was certainly correct when they advised you punctuate your work more carefully. You have a rare talent for using words. Your story reads like the transcription of a master storyteller's spoken recitation of a tale. That is a rare quality in a writer's work and is greatly to be admired. Thank you for sharing. 5 stars.
wmjm542 months agoYou need to buy a bag of commas and find the right places to put them. Try reading your stories aloud to see where you're pausing.
