All Comments on 'Dan's Conditioning'

Just the type of escapism I needed today. Hope you have more. (5)

Very good story, like the intro and now I am looking forward to the next installment. Keep it coming.

What a beginning to a summer long story. I wonder how long she intends to humiliate and degrade Dan? I hope for exhibition and all kinds of play. Poor Dan will be so sissified at the end that he won't know any other kind of life. Maybe there will be an end and Dan will be able to go to college with a whole new set of confidence to deal nice for women. Nice beginning.

I really enjoyed this story, suitably naughty and nasty, I'm looking forward to hearing more of Dan's submission and sissification! The images added to the story, particularly the first one, the dirtier the better!

What a great hot start! Can’t wait for more.

I like the be pictures

Thank you all so much for the all the positive feedback. There’s much more on the way. chapter two is almost finished and should be published soon. I also have started to write chapters three and four as well.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and time with us all.

Love how this has started and can’t wait to read more

When your story brings us back around to the beginning, I can give a higher vote.

There is a point where sex is not worth the cost

Eagerly waiting for the next two chapters!

see title

Love it.A real woman!Great stuff.

The "blackmail" scenario in this story is ridiculously weak sauce. EVEN AT EIGHTEEN I'd have told the bitch, "Go ahead, post my pictures. Post video. I will happily post comments that I was about to FUCK YOU, along with your full name, phone number and address. Oh, and then I'll have you arrested for posting revenge porn, which is illegal here in the US."

Then I'd have gone home, spanked it, and WAITED for the stupid cow to try post her idiotically weak revenge porn.

Other than the idiotically weak "blackmail" attempt, this story is ... kinda ... okay.

"Then I'd have gone home, spanked it, and WAITED for the stupid cow to try post her idiotically weak revenge porn.

Other than the idiotically weak "blackmail" attempt, this story is ... kinda ... okay."

Yeah, you're 1000% waiting for each new chapter. 😁🙄

so she ia rapist and he went along with it? yay nice bit of writing laughable at best

How old are you? This story seems to have been written by a 13 year old.

Pointer finger? Have you never heard of an index finger?

You need to learn how to spell if you're (not your) going to write.

What's a tong? Do you mean his tongue?

Threw? No, it's through.

Dan always has a capital D. You tend to put capitals where they're not needed.

It's a shame you can't write as it could have been an OK story.

You need an editor and possibly someone to proofread it before you post more on this site.

I loved your story. Can't wait for more.

Aside from some grammatical errors, it was okay I guess.

Yes, your story needs work and a good proofreader. You need to focus more and not jump in thoughts. Don't stop writing though, it takes time and experience. I don't have the talent or bravery to post a story, you seem to have some of both.

Ridiculous. Report the abuse and have her arrested. Done and done.

I thought the story was good. I have never read a story or book that didnt have errors in it, even with proof readers. I cant wait for the rest

It was pretty good, but it's just not how a kid that age would respond. He certainly would be freaked the fuck out and fighting her every step of the way.

One of the best erotica I’ve ever read related to forced fem/sissification. Please continue writing more.

Story is good, despite the weak blackmail. There wasn't anything on that original video that wouldn't be passed off as anything other than a normal horny teenager. In fact, the only person that looks like a horrible slut, is the mom. If he knew his ass from a hole in the ground, she would be in deep shit.and

Really promising. Liked the first part, looking forward to the others.

Kendra seems great, our main dude could fain some more character

This was great!