All Comments on 'Darejani'

This is a good story, very well written too. Thank you so much.

An interesting beginning, Be good to hear how meeting each others family goes, and of course the wedding and the baby making.

Please continue with another chapter. This one was fun.

I'd like to see more of this couple

Oh yes, continue. He has much to teach her. And I'm not just talking about love and sex. They have a whole life to discover and many adventures to go on. I hope you continue to capture our imagination with this story. Thank you for your time and efforts.

Thank you 😊

Hell, yeah! Keep writing about these two...

More if this please, was a godd read and would love to see where this went.

Wonderful story. Please continue it!

Memorable and sweet. Hope there is more for this pair.

Would love to read more!

Would love to hear more about these two. Cross-cultural love!

Should you write more? DUH!

Thanks for sharing!

To answer your question, definitely keep the story going. I find I really like the characters and your style. So looking forward to another chapter. Good luck

Another incomplete story on Lit (7-2021)

I enjoyed this, but two things bothered me. Firstly, you clearly appreciate women, so I was surprised at the slut shaming when you described Dar as doing something, but not in a slutty way. Are 'slut' tendancies really so awful? Would you judge a man for the same behaviour?

Secondly telling her to pack an overnight bag from day one seemed contrived and a bit cruel when he had yet to decide what he was going to do about Jan. It took me out of the story. He could have just taken a bit more time, which seems more in keeping with his character, or told her on Tuesday that he had broken up with Jan and to bring an overnight bag on Wednesday.