All Comments on 'Daring Dabbs Pt. 02'

I would have liked more of a plot, and more of a buildup before plunging into the wild sex. I know there was a Part 1, and I read it, of course, but still. Fortunately, the epilogue saved your story, as least for me. ~~JBE

Wow! Fantastic Daphne! I love how the teacher got confident because of Dabbs in the first chapter and turns it around on her in this chapter. The breast milking was really hot.

loved the story. I look forward to reading more of your stories

Is it his baby?

Awesome!

oh wow, this was so hot. i didn't love the first part of this so i hesitated about reading this but i'm so glad i did!! the image of her getting spanked, completely fucked over in her wedding dress and with her shoes/bridal bouquet and then squirting was incredible. absolutely loved it.

IDK why, but in my head. I imagine the Groom to be knows. Not only that but consented. Maybe even have been in the woods watching the whole time....

I realy liked the story . Had a little of everything milk from tits , streaching of the ass a double dose of cum up the pussy and ass. The placing of her knickers up her cunt could have been earlier to keep the cum in place. Nothing better than a dose of cum up ass or cunt as the bride is married to someone else. I hope the kid was his.

Hi

Just finished reading Daring Dabs part 2. It is outstanding. I look forward to Part 3, as I look forward to all your writing.

I wanted to give the story 5 stars, but the rating stars never came up. I tried a couple times, but the stars still did not come up. I even logged out and then back in. Based on this issue I feel you are not getting the positive responses you deserve.

I thought you would like to know of the issue.

Stay safe

Andy

Well written

Hi Daphne,

Loved the story. That was very hot. Thanks for the erection.

Love,

Alan

Wonderful story!