All Comments on 'Daring Dates: Family Feature'

How can he be touching his mother's "panty hose covered leg," then undo her jeans.

Second person is fine for manuals, but it sucks for prose.

Pantyhose or jeans...among others...proofread people, damn

But not in a good way. Lack of attention to details immediately take the reader out of the story and causes confusion. As others have mentioned contradictory descriptions are annoying but also trying to imagine that this could occur in a theater that only had two open seats when the two protagonists walk in. The almost total lack of realistic behaviors (the boy and his MILF mom didn’t seem to think twice or protest). The fact that the MILF could get completely naked before the husband notices what’s going on... it’s just... painful. I couldn’t get much past that point.

Can you make forced incest story where mom son or bro sis are very reluctant and humiliated for being forced to fuck but still they cum

I echo comments below, but a fun read, totally unrealistic fantasy but, fun.