All Comments on 'Daring Emma Knocks Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I am reading all this sitting in my office.. Fucking wet

Can't wait any longer to go back home and ride my pillow

Arpan_DeyArpan_Deyover 6 years ago
horny!!!

My penis became a hard rock reading ur story!!!! Aaaahhhh.....I'm horny, can I get ur number????

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not laughably bad, but not perfect

I don't think it's awful; I think the narrator sounds a bit young, and that's the only cringey part, otherwise the sexy scene was fine. Work on the plot more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Laughably bad

UGH!

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