All Comments on 'Daring Lisa Marvell Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Too Much of a Good Thing?

I liked the 'A Daring Reporter' series, but I think seven chapters on this subject was enough. You seem to have run out of ideas and are just writing for the sake of this.

jphilbjphilbalmost 8 years ago
Keep it up!

Doesn't look like my previous comment went through. But if Anon is tired of the series he does not have to read it. The rest of us love it and can't wait for more!!!

Bet you get a red H.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Lovin It!

I love the fact the Natalie has authority over Lisa's adventures. It adds a bit of a dom/sub dynamic to the narrative. Looking forward to where that leads. Fantastic idea to have an extended video with Lisa getting naked, especially the "Lisa's back" line. Can't wait to find out how the director's cut went, and what Natalie's reaction will be. Keep it coming, you've got a fan in me!

-Lily

hotjimmyhotjimmyalmost 8 years ago

loved this series and cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I realy liked this story and i'm happy you're continuing it. I thing it could be interesting if Lisa put in the shade Natalie with her dares and then Natalie finding ways to humiliate her through dares. Maybe include more than just nudity into dares

robertlrobertlalmost 8 years ago
Glad to re-find the series

I'd been watching, looking and hoping for a revival of the series. I hope that some of the dares will only be revealed to Lisa on the air and that some will be over the top embarrassing, even to her. Thank you so much for bringing Lisa back.

MorevinilaMorevinila5 months ago

Slight change in character - expecting steamier stories soon

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