All Comments on 'Dark as Daylight Ch. 14'

Thank you for continuing your story. It brightens my night to see a new chapter when i refresh Lit at 1230am pacific. (I have health issues of my own that have "shwacked" my sleep schedule). We get to see bits and pieces of your soul in your writing. And we are blessed whenever we get a bit more of it.

I remember finding "There Must Be a Mistake" and as a science fiction nut enjoyed it very much. I must say that your writing has improved since then, not that it was bad, but you are telling a the character's stories now, not quite focused so much on the minutiae of details. It's the people that you've given us to fall in love with. You still get lost in the details now and then, but it happens less often. It's lost some of it's "dryness."

In then end though, it all comes down to "The Story." And the story here is fantastic. I think several of your characters need to seek professional help for bipolar disorders, the way they bounce from happy to sad to mad to happy to angry to happy, it just isn't healthy or normal, but the story is fantastic. You've done well with the buildup to the villan. We hope your health holds for as long as your inspiration to write holds out.

Our thoughts and prayers are with you. Thank you again for the effort you've put into spinning this wild ride.

You never fail to give an excellent read. I always look for the latest chapter.

I are feeling better and with GODS help on the road to recovery. Know that you are well thought of and in many peoples prayers.

MAY GOD BE WITH YOU.

Instead of rejecting the story, They cut off one or two pages from the ending. I will add them to the beginning of chapter 15 and I hope they make sense to you because they will be out of context.

PD, thank you for another chapter. I appreciate your effort. I think of you often and wonder how you're doing. May God be with you.

I WAS HEADING TO BED AND THOUGHT I WOULD CHECK AND SEE IF YOU HAD POSTED ANYTHING NEW. IT IS NOW ALMOST 2 AM AND I AM SORRY I READ IT SO FAST.

HOPE ALL IS GOING AS RIGHT FOR YOU AS POSSIBLE.

YOU KNOCKED IT OUT OF THE PARK AGAIN.

TOM

Hope you are feeling better and continue to write. Love your work and please post everything soonest - can't wait to find out who the bad apple is

I've been reading your books here for a couple of years now, and I finally realized that all the women you write are actually PARODIES of the strong female lead while at the same time satirizing the ultra macho smack pow I love you characters.

Well played sir, well played indeed

You are good at writing,keeping the story moving and the characters interesting. I eagerly wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!!

Who is the head of the spear? This is so good!

This chapter tends run too long!!!!More coverage on Col.Cannoyon!!!!

I am so happy when I see the next chapter because it means you are still with us. Keep up the fight. This story just keeps getting better I cant remember another author I have so eagerly awaited their next piece of work. I sincerely hope she keeps you with us for a long time.

I love this story and love the character Teddy. Please keep up your writing if possible.

Be safe and thank you.

Yet another fantastic chapter keep them coming I can't wait to find out who the head of spear is I'm guessing but I'm not sure lol keep up the good work and keep fighting #keephealthyplease

I've been checking back almost everyday waiting for the next chapter, and as always you never disappoint. Very well done and now I'm back to waiting for the next awesome chapter :)

Not up to your standard. It looks like you copy pasted the same conversation between 2 people again and again. Different characters same conversation. How is it that everyone in this universe have the same personality? It has been a good journey and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

5 out of 5 stars, I couldn't stop reading it until it was done.

Its a good story and it has captured my attentions for weeks while I've been waiting for the surgeons. But the last two of three chapters could have been condensed to perhaps half a chapter. As I read its sections I've been haunted by the idea "He doesn't know how to end this. Has he thought about timeline, shape and characteristics of the extra party on cold size. Will they freeze to death before the new baby gets old enough to meet them?"

Its an alien group. How many heads do they have, do they walk on feet or roll on wheels?

It was pretty good at first, but this is getting ridiculous. Time to wrap it up. Do you even know how it's going to end?

WHEN YOU START TO COMPLAIN, YOU MUST OFFER UP YOUR OWN WORK TO COMPARE IT TO, OR ELSE SHUT THE HELL UP. IF YOU DO NOT LIKE IT, DON'T READ IT.

AND WE ARE IMPRESSED THAT YOU ARE AFRAID TO USE YOUR OWN NAME.

That's hilarious! I guess tomscards is your real name? You're just as anonymous as anyone, and you can't even remember to turn off your caps lock.

This is an excellent series, but it has been going nowhere. I agree with that. It's out of gas and ready for the garage.

MY NAME IS LISTED HERE. AND I KEEP CAPS ON BECAUSE A FEW OF MY FRIENDS HAVE TROUBLE EVEN READING CAPS.

GOOGLE tomscards AND YOU CAN FIND ME.

They're going to meet the aliens and fix their ship.

Jennifer will marry one and he will be biologically compatible enough to have kids.

Delicious and Gray will have a couple more kids.

So will Gordon and Zoey.

It doesn't have to happen in this book though,

and he is sick so he may not finish.

If you hear anything about him, please let us know.

Thank you for a beautiful series, your characters and plotlines are well drawn out and a really fun read.

question: what happened to the most recent chapter (chapter 14) it seems unfinished

i don't leave comments after each chapter because it takes me to long to type it. I'd rather be reading the articles that you have so divinely written. I started with the chapters where they invented and made the good luck 1. so i have been following the luck family from there. I love your work, and i am not normally a sci-fi fan.

hornyoldgoat69

The story is very, very interesting, but the spelling was that of an average American 6 grader. You really need an editor.

I love the stories but man SERIOUSLY get a damn editor, there are spelling mistakes, words missing and people talking to themselves because you lost track and frankly the more i read the it the gets it worse.....See what i did there? You've done it REPEATEDLY