All Comments on 'Dark Deal Pt. 02 - The Girls Next Door'

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chipmonk9chipmonk912 months ago

I can't wait for part 3

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Ha!

Ole Modeus seems to have pulled a fast one. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next.

knpvknpv12 months ago

another great story love all of your stories

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Be nice if the women stated if they were on birth control or not. Breed himself a few women.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

That's how you start a chapter. Nice to see him enjoy himself. The demon is definitely taking his toll. No free lunch. Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great stuff!

ctalonctalon9 months ago

Hopefully a part 3 will be written. He should be getting his mother in that chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Write chapter 3! He needs to (1) find out that the demon used his body to bang his mom, and (2) bang his mom while conscious of it! Pleeeeeeeease!

trousersnaketrousersnake7 months ago

Feels like some bits are missing. Did I miss something between Chap 1 and 2? Just felt like a big jump in the narrative

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